BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

[B.A.D.]

hi there
please also feed on the acapella and beat volumes, thats my main concern on this particular

cover:


Title: Wonderland
Artist: Big Ax-D
Produced & Mixed by: Big Ax-D
Link:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/73732365b48ae919/

Lyrics:

(Verse 1)
now let me tell you about a place that I call wonderland
where everything thats on your mind can be made at any time
you can stay as long you can handle all this magic
wave bye at the horizon, all the moments which'd been tragic
see I dont miss em, no need to please em back
and yes I will diss em, they're so pissed at me... fuck that
I dont remember any names, I dont remember any face
All I remember is a country ran like a race at last place
and if youre stupid you can tempt me, to punch you in the face
If youre dumb enough to fuck with me, I'll hand you in a raze
while they handing me a raise, my eyes rolling in a craze
now Im lost in my own maze, Its the wonders that I chase
Picutre the most beautifull girl, but this time she does loves you
my mind losts all focus, relax before the chorus shoots
in... like a dream, but you can't wake up jet...
just try to enjoy it.... click the button.... eject...

(hook)
now just close your eyes and try to imagine
this is so amazing, the way I do my magic
Will you come with me to this place I love
I call this place "My Little Wonderland".. so come....

(Verse 2)
hey, I havent seen you in a long time girl
I remember you and me, we wanted to share a world
well now I got the perfect or us you just have to come with me
get ready, close your eyes... [and let me take y ou in]------------ {effect}
everybody has they own wonderland... its a whole 'nother land
Im a whole diferent man... for you girl... youre my fan
its a change... a little far from the ordinary range
crafted for you little angel, From Paris to Spain
and what about those little kids, who'd like to enjoy a bit of this
Pass me the keys little fella, whats ur name, whats ur biz-
-ness in here... this place is for the grown ups only
so close homie...... but youre still far away from home
meanwhile you can sing my song... down the yellow brick road
while me and Dorothy Gale do things you wouldnt't know
see the above fireflies... flying the purple skies
I'll call you tomorrow, but this world is full of lies....

(Hook)
now just close your eyes and try to imagine
this is so amazing, the way I do my magic
Will you come with me to this place I love
I call this place "My Little Wonderland".. so come....

(Verse 3)
Wonderland, A place full of things that you dont get
like why people always do things they know they will regret
Big Ax-D's like preist in this preeschool teachings
a blizz fogs the class and one girl is missing
I just sent her to wonderland, planet of dreams
there she will meet me.. and she'll be 18
really, im just unpolite, you know about it
the way that I express myself is all erratic
and if you get neurotic on me, I'll get manic
wont change this habbit of jumpin like a rabbit
I think Glorifiiiieeeed.... oh my
my inventions are paying of so nice
but maybe they'll cry later... its worth a little try
Even haters celebrating, Im making people fly
and girl I love when you fly on mine... I like
when your supermotor skillz where the belly buttom lies

(Hook)
now just close your eyes and try to imagine
this is so amazing, the way I do my magic
Will you come with me to this place I love
I call this place "My Little Wonderland".. so come....

(Final Hyphed up hook)
now just close your eyes and try to imagine
this is so amazing, the way I do my magic
Will you come with me to this place I love
I call this place "My Little Wonderland".. so come....


TUNE IN ON FRIDAY FOR KEZ's BREAKOUT RELEASE!!!!

[Arabian Shady]

DAYYUMMM!!
the beat was sooo simple, and definately catchy.i digg it
The verses are sick, i didnt find anything wrong with the verses, EXCELLENT flow, i like your delivery on this one . the slurrin is down to a couple words.
The hook goes really well with the beat homie, i like how you tackled it
the beat volume and acapella seem just about right to me
dope song brotha, i digg this ALOT

[Jay-19]

When I heard the beat in the beginning, I wasn't too sure I was going to like it, but damn!
You brought fire Ax!

You made the beat good man, even though there was some flaws in the verses, but fuck that if the track overall is hot!
Flow was good and delivery was awesome.


Love the chorus, that shit is catchy as hell!

Really good track bro!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

when the melody kicked in and everything was quiet around me i freaked out for a sec lol
flow is steady...somtimes i noticed you speed up to catch the clap so that wasnt clean but overall i liked the flow..also delivery was very controlled...lyrics are kool actually...
hook...meh you did better.....after 6times the high voice gets annoying..to me at least haha
but its good for what it is...
volume was allright to me..but the mixing sounds bass-y..i dont know how to explain..but could be more tighter...if you know what i mean...
beat is nice....finally you slow down your beats

[randomghost]

beat is sick ur acapella volume is a bit higher than the beat...lower da volume a bit....nice flow....lyrics is not bad....delivery is amazing..simply this beat made fo ya style...verse 2 is ma fav verse 3 got good energy...like ya style ...good stuff bro keep them coming

[Le Tunisien]

yeah the beat was simple but enjoyable xD !
yeah i like the flow ,very entertaining and the hook is catchy
we want some more songs axd

[Mr. Chambers]

very dope song......flow was a lil choppy here and there......but delivery was nice...beat was dope...chorus was off the hook...cwatididthar????

good song ax!

[Tash8]

ur flow isn't choppy at all, i'ts just ur overlays aren't exact, i know it's a pain to edit them but it's neccesarry.

great song though, lvoed it

[Mr. Chambers]

ur flow isn't choppy at all, i'ts just ur overlays aren't exact, i know it's a pain to edit them but it's neccesarry.

great song though, lvoed it

it is....but its also kinda his style........i personally don't mind.....it wasn't like his flow was completely off....and its still an enjoyable song

[B.A.D.]

chea

thanks a lot for the comments, I appreciate them a lot, Im glad ya'll liked it

@ Tash.... thanks man, I didnt noticed that, I took a listen again and youre completely right, now I will always pay extra attention to the layovers

@ Randon... I'll lower the pella bit half a db and listen to it, see how it sounds... thanks

again, thanks to all the feeders,

looking for more, also regarding the beat, what can I do to improve em

[_Ironic_]

lol @ the flute

and the drumline made me half smile.

first verse was pretty dope buddy. flow was ehhh and the overlays were off and gave it and echo tone to it.

hook was not my style. not feelin it

2nd verse it was decent, but not as well done as the first, flow was choppy didnt come together very well

3rd verse: starts off good, the delivery is pretty hot, the flow is choppy throughout..

overall i feel if some of the adlibs/overdubs were too loud and kinda ruined the song for me...i dunno it sounded decent, but i think it could be better.

[BabyBLue91]

I enjoyed listening to this.. & your accent makes it that much better for me. Your 3rd verse is my personal favorite

[B.A.D.]

Thank you Ironic... I'll play better with the adlib volumes from now on also with more attention.
I know the misplacing of overlays made the flow sound choppy... I'll fix that ASAP hahaha
again, thanks for listening

@ Babyblue thanks a lot, Im glad you liked it ... when r you coming to Melbourne????

[BabyBLue91]

Big Ax-D.. espero que puedo venir pronto! I hope i said that right! lol

[B.A.D.]

Big Ax-D.. espero que puedo venir pronto! I hope i said that right! lol

almost perfect hahaha

lemme kno