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by **DƎRDYPK** » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:11

Sounds pretty decent Cole
once you get into using overdubs your shits gonna sound mad hot :worship:

by **GoodGirlsGetGutted** » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:13

You had to let the beat run that long?

I'd recommend you work on breath control and vocal dynamics.
Look up and learn the Alexander Technique. It's a methodology used mainly by opera singers to allow more air into their diaphragms, and also to expel it with more force and breath economy.

Not bad though.

Website · by **Solace** » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:56

I tell em take five like when a bitch gets fist fucked

:laughing:

Tight written. You got deliv and flow pretty well actually, so much better than I expected. Something about the acapella quality wasnt right, but that may have been the mixing. I really want to see this redone, or something. Get PK to mix this shit up.

by **Mr. Chambers** » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:57

i'm impressed.....this being one of your first recordings...its very very good......

like GGGG said your breathe control is outta wack....that will develop with experience and experience with writing schemes....
your flow is rushed @ times...but once again that comes with experience..............

overall.....i think with experience you'll be pretty dam good.. :y:

....just keep dropping...i'll be taking an interest in your future drops...

by **classthe_king** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:20

I don't really like this beat at all. I didn't like the lyrics either but thats not what were judging. I'll pretty much say what everyone else has. He quality doesn't sound very well but you said it wasn't mixed. I'd really like to hear this mixed and then see what it sounds like. Your delivery is alot better then most people i've heard when there first starting. You just have to keep rapping until your confident with your voice. I'd like to see you record divine struggle :coffee:

by **classthe_king** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:24

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I don't really like this beat at all. I didn't like the lyrics either but thats not what were judging. I'll pretty much say what everyone else has. He quality doesn't sound very well but you said it wasn't mixed. I'd really like to hear this mixed and then see what it sounds like. Your delivery is alot better then most people i've heard when there first starting. You just have to keep rapping until your confident with your voice. I'd like to see you record divine struggle

I'd have to put emotion and a dark vibe to my voice which I'm not confident with

this was a throwaway 16, I don't waste good material

I'd like to hear this mixed though

by **Jaz** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:25

You should invest in some equipment or if you do have it and just didn't mix it, you should do so haha, because this was pretty good.

Website · by **Solace** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:26

I agree with Class about the beat. I hate it, but you probably wrote it to that so whatever.

by **classthe_king** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:30

It wasn't that funny to me. I saw the wordplay but it wasn't anything great. And saying things like your lighting a hobbit on fire doesn't appeal to me.

by **Mr. Chambers** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:32

if you wanna improve breathe control...try reciting verses while running or on a treadmill....

by **classthe_king** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:33

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:It wasn't that funny to me. I saw the wordplay but it wasn't anything great. And saying things like your lighting a hobbit on fire doesn't appeal to me.

that was the only time meant to be funny though damn now you hurt my feelings bro *sheds tear

You know I still love your shit :angry:

by **Jaz** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:34

chambers wrote:if you wanna improve breathe control...try reciting verses while running or on a treadmill....

Does this actually work? I don't have a huge problem with breath control but it could always be better.

Website · by **Solace** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:34

classthe_king wrote:
Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:It wasn't that funny to me. I saw the wordplay but it wasn't anything great. And saying things like your lighting a hobbit on fire doesn't appeal to me.

that was the only time meant to be funny though damn now you hurt my feelings bro *sheds tear

You know I still love your shit

2Girls1Cup style.

That's beautiful you two. :coffee:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:34

that was decent...
mixing was out of place and quality but other than that i enjoy the flow and delivery..
so good one :y:

u only can improve :y:

by **classthe_king** » Mar 22nd, '10, 22:36

Solace wrote:2Girls1Cup style.

That's beautiful you two.

Solace, We bound to fight like two squirrels, one nut
Cause me and Cole are sick like two girls, one cup

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