Infection of Evils Ft. M-Russ

[Mr. Chambers]

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this is fucking sick....can't lie....


{Chambers Verse}
i guess theres nothing left for me to do...evil shoot//
i'm burning in hell for my songs long before the needle grooves//
every inch of vinyll...and my lines'll//
fill ya intelligence.....ignorance not tolerated be mindful//
black thought's....my quest love..name is in a noose//
if i go out on a limb....i'll be hangin with the roots//
gotta gang that relays...conveys shit in the booth//
and all these fake players....well i'd trade em for the truth//
i got a serious message//
cuz i fear the connection of nearly respected and clear misconceptions//
but thats barely of essence//
cuz when i share....or bare these weird intellect things.....the snare is a weapon//
i can rock a song.....that line....can't stop for long//
droppin bombs............but got more fuck ups then the octamom's//
8.....speaking of ate....thats something i do//
fucking with you......neine..thats german if your stuck or confused//
skill i'ma ten......so i ain't boutin for long//
in essence.....what i'm saying is don't count on my fall//
i'm cleaning out my closet of the mountain of skulls//
steady flow of regrets....so i drown in the sorrows//
gotta sound you can barrow//
an album of bars so i'ma always be bound to tomorrow//
so i'm heading for the future...embedded in rhymes//
and the shock value's current....i'm a head of my time//
i'm the best...period....no other sentence complies//
noones a menace like i....hit with tremendous replies//
and these envious guys all wanna mention in rhymes//
but if i fuck with a 16......its consensual crime//
and eventually you'll venture into death in the eyes//
you'll intentionally get severed when your met with a slice//
so i'm guessin that the messages to set in your mind//
don't test me or get molested with deadly sublimes//
your mixtape....you can call the fight on the back lash//
and thats why you apologize of the last track//
your just a nerd who can't be raw when your raps crap//
not hip hop...you just the shit that falls from the ass crack//


(M-Russ Verse)

now that the olympics are over, i need a minute to sober up/
i've been in a state of creative vacancy, slowing up,
my need for releasing my very arrogant narratives/
my curriculum's ridiculous, prepare for demerits kids,
my larynx inherits wit, but ballin, i fail to be it/
my tempers rise, indentifying all these australian kids,
naw, i'm just playin they legit, off of my cranium this/
unstoppable apocalypse is poppin it may be the shit,
tom and me spray when we spit, i vomit these playfully slick/
economy stimulating these songs that you hate to resist,
always my name is synonymous with supremacy/
on a list of the ten mc's you would want in your memory,
i'm the top of the chronicle and the peak of the manifest/
the weak'll sit down and rest, i'm keeping your clan in check,
the same is for chambers he drains his head with his dirty wits/
so he should change his middle name to 'enter the 36',
...did i mention? i'm quenching this thirsty niche/
go rent you some dentures and send for pention you wordy bitch,
because before you think that you could enter my sturdy mix/
you'll get the senior price for early bird and for early grits,
i verbally murder kids when i purge my vocabulary/
i'm busrting your capillaries, i'll curdle your glass of dairy,
i spit and exhibit acidic riddles, you laugh along/
and i fester in your chest you're best to get you some gaviscon,
i shatter the tracks i'm on, i expend instrumentals to smoke/
i'm livid with vivid visions of spending my benjamin notes,
attention eventually goes, like rhyming abilities/
i'm a masochistic bastard with his mind on just killing beats,
aligning your spine with the dotted lines on the boulevard/
i rap semi-automatic vernacular, bullet bars,
just don't be surprised if you find you dad and your mom in the morgue/
or packaged in the back of the hatchback of the honda accord,

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

delivery improved to me..at least you stepped it up on this track..
good one....beat was beast...love every element of it...
your flow good as always...
hook is meh...
m-russ was kool...flow was nice...altho i think he slipped twice...
but he rhymed like a motherfucker
good good track

[DƎRDYPK]

Tom Chambers over the Agent Orange instrumental?
words don't even explain how dope that is

[Tash8]

but if i fuck with a 16......its consensual crime//

dope line, real dope line man

overall it was sick, i love how you changed ur voice here
so i drown in the sorrows//
gotta sound you can barrow//
an album of bars so i'ma always be bound to tomorrow//

flow was overall good ^ the flow on that was dope as fuck, but ur overlays were really distracting at times, they weren't perfect.

the other guy was good but his delivery is not good.

[Solace]

This shit is tight as fuck.

[Mr. Chambers]

dude is dope as fuck...i don't give a fuck what anyone says.....kid can do some shit...

[Xray]

Not bad. The beat had great potential for this to go off, but I think you both didn't deliver that. Delivery was held back, M-Russ is still dope lyrically but he also still sounds like George Bush to me. I couldn't listen all the way through, not your verse, not his. In my opinion the delivery ruined it for me. Had it been more crazy and had your flow being more energetic, I think this track would of been awesome. But both of you didn't deliver that. Not a bad track, could of been MUCH better.

[B.A.D.]

I like the beat... very good choice man

hmm... concept??....

I think I see your big big problem
-you always keep the same flow which gets boring after a while, to be honest, your verse didnt surprise, even if it has all, flow, good damn lyrics, all the necessary things for a Hip Hop track... It still lacks in creativity... I dont mean that you dont have creative rhymes, I think the whole shit was boring. There wasnt a single element of your verse which shined, except the lyrics. What you are failing to do is music. I think theres more to a track that a good beat from soundclick, clean quality and dope lyrics.... you have the emotion and the delivery, but its always the same, like your voice sounds of someone you are not.
My suggestion is put the cocky chambers aside, try not to always be dissing somone in all your verses, even if their just un-directed/random punchlines, there's no element of surprise aside from the ooohhhsss and whoaasss.
The other dude, well, he rhymes nice, he kept it entertaining with the flow, actually a pretti good verse, here he had no problem of pulling out a vettori and overshadowing you, bcuz there was nothing important to talk about.

let me clear it again. Not always you have to do what I suggest, but you will find it more interesting to get out of your usual shit and work it up. I love the tracks in which you get deep and pour it all out, but those are another thing completely.

I may not have been so clear, so if u have any Questions or sommin, Im always on msn.

Overall.... great track for what it is.

[hype]

the second verse reminds me of eminem's rhyming on his infinite tracks, it's a multi-fest. crazy. i loved the beat.

[Mr. Chambers]

i can understand the delivery a bit...but the flow?...i switched up the rhyme scheme multiple times in here....there would be times i'd just use a 4 word multi....then there'd be times i use internal rhymes.....

if yall mean the pace....tbh...i'm not really a fan of using a fast flow....


but yes let me know....

[Mr. Chambers]

up

[Tash8]

i think what ax-d is talking about is ur constnatly going at one speed..and that gets boring...i agree with him...changing up the tempo of ur lyrics would make it sick, listen to Tech N9ne he does it the most of anyone i've seen...it makes a verse more interesting especially when it's a long verse like this....dont neccessarily rap the same speed thru out the verse, i know that's flowing but learning to expand words or speed them up at certain times is what makes a flow exciting and stand out.

"steady flow of regrets....so i drown in the sorrows//
gotta sound you can barrow//"

you did here, notice how u expand sorr-oww, borr-ow