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Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tranquil » Mar 26th, '10, 11:20

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Artist: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8)
Produced By: Mike Lightner
Link: http://www.zshare.net/audio/7420791948c191f1/

First off, thanks to Big Ax-D for the dope cover :worship: thanks man. And thanks to Tash8 for jumping on this track and laying a dope verse :worship: . Hope yall enjoy :smoking:
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tash8 » Mar 26th, '10, 20:13

nice coverrr.thx ax
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Postby Tash8 » Mar 27th, '10, 04:47

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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Slovinec » Mar 27th, '10, 07:33

very nice flow ruthless
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tranquil » Mar 27th, '10, 10:31

BizarreKId wrote:very nice flow ruthless

Thanks :flower: Bump!!!
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Vettori » Mar 27th, '10, 18:42

Nice song..Enjoyable. has that stoner feel to it haha, Now first guy needs some work, quality was nice enough for hearing...But yea just seemed "plain" lyrically and delivery wise, Step up ur wordplay, music is entertainent, u need to make sure there are appealing things going on in the song.. But I liked it, because i can put alot of the mistakes aside... seems like uve got some experience, but would definatly reccomend some practice sessions, Tash on the other hand, started it off amazingly I liked it immediatly...SIMON SAYS hahaha Jokes bud, greatest part :P and ur flow Has picked up alot..in such short time...

Great track. Tash keep at it, other dude, work harder...im not hatin, just some advice.
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tash8 » Mar 27th, '10, 19:18

thx bro
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 27th, '10, 20:24

i dont know how to feed your part ruthless...i just havent the right words to explain how it was a taste of nothing...sorry man lol...
tash well kool fast flow...you kept it under control...so aite..your voice was funny at parts lol no offense
oh third verse was kinda enjoyable.. :y:
maybe im not feelin it that much cuz im not a fellow weedhead..
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tash8 » Mar 27th, '10, 20:27

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:i dont know how to feed your part ruthless...i just havent the right words to explain how it was a taste of nothing...sorry man lol...
tash well kool fast flow...you kept it under control...so aite..your voice was funny at parts lol no offense
oh third verse was kinda enjoyable.. :y:
maybe im not feelin it that much cuz im not a fellow weedhead..


lmao yea at my voice, i noticed the same thing...i fixed it when i rerecorded it but i didn't enjoy that verse as much

haha anyways thx
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tranquil » Mar 27th, '10, 23:04

thanks for all your comments, some of you like it, some dont, its all good, just experimenting with diff styles :smoking:
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 28th, '10, 06:36

Coleon wrote:crazy artwork :y:


thanks mate

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I really like this track, bcuz the whole feeling of it is nice... plus the vibe.... amazing
now ruthless... you got that west coast too short flow, now... great job... but now you gotta improve the wordplay and lyrical in it... there's a lot of great things you can do with weed tracks.
tash... lmao... well, I like all of it except the voice. but thats just the personal taste cuz there's really nothing bad with your verse. flow is good... although, don't leave empty spots... I notices 2 or 3. those dont work.
third verse.... Hmm better than the first, good job mate.

oh and the hook..... its great :y:

overall: Tash :worship: Ruthless :worship: Song :worship:

but work on those aspects I told ya :y: ... oh... and mixing is good :y:
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tranquil » Mar 28th, '10, 07:51

Thanks to everyone :flower:
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby _Ironic_ » Mar 28th, '10, 18:59

Ruthless I've always been very impressed with your hook writing ability...you really do make catchy and well done chorus's.

1st verse: flow is super choppy, you just bump your lines closer together..try flowing to a different pace...a lil faster and it won't be so bad...slow flows are cool if they're done well..you can't have pauses of silence every bar...you can keep it slow but you need to connect the words faster...but delivery was pretty dope

2nd verse: tash at times you shined and then others it sounded like you were rapping away from the mic. I know alot of people on here dont like it but honestly if ya'll punched in more your quality and deliveries would increase extremely.

3rd verse: nice closing verse, flow was much better and im feelin the lyrics even though I'm not a weed smoker, I know plenty of them. this did the job

pretty decent track, flows could use some work but other than that this was pretty solid, keep droppin :y: :y:

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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tash8 » Mar 28th, '10, 19:11

_Ironic_ wrote:2nd verse: tash at times you shined and then others it sounded like you were rapping away from the mic. I know alot of people on here dont like it but honestly if ya'll punched in more your quality and deliveries would increase extremely.


hey bro, i do punch in at times..but not on this song for some weird reason.. but yeah i mean i did two versions of this song:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7431464565871f09/

and i punched in on that, let me know what u think of that version..
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Re: Ruthless (Feat. Tash8) - Blazin'

Postby Tranquil » Mar 29th, '10, 02:20

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Thanks for the feedback man, i will deff keep that in mind next time i record a track like this :smoking:
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