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...'Cause you're not in it?

Tash8 wrote:Solace wrote:^I wanna take a stab at this.
...'Cause you're not in it?
yes, no tash8 productions on this album.
thats BLASPHEMOUS!




gonna check this shit right now 

). Dope song, rhymes dope, flow seemed on point throughout, hook fits and sounds good. much replay value. (Same sound on this song though, with your voice, we talked bout this before).
). Hooks good because its diff then the first 3 songs, but just a good hook, fits well though. 2nd verse dope, rhymes nice, delivery needs to be better tho, you're kinda-monotone (like we talked about) kinda ruins it. no real replay value for this track. 
i'm guessing beat was only that long, too short for a more serious-emotional style track. i liked ur lyrics in this, song has some replay value, but def too short.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren

Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren

Emadyville wrote:o btw, the reason this is in 3 posts, once i get to the bottom of the message box the typing jumps and i cant see what im writin, so sorry for that.
Ok to rate this mixtape overall, i'd say that it's not as good as the last mixtape/album I gave you full feedback for. what I said a lot on each song, and i got tired of repeating it but I wanted to be thorough, is that you still, on almost every song sound the same. in addition, your flow is so similar on songs on this, as well as your last mixtape. i've told u this before, you have great rhymes, and as im listening im often thinking damn, kid keeps this multi going, but when it keeps sounding the same its like it doesn't even matter anymore because it's boring. you have to work on a delivery and have more emotion and changes in emotion, the songs you dont sound monotoned stand out a lot more and are much more listenable because of it.
your flow overall was solid except for a little on women woes, but while you flowed well, you used the same structured flow so often again it became boring. one thing i didnt like either was the fact that you didnt have any stand out concepts except for napoleon, i remember last mixtape had a lot more concept type tracks than this one did, which can also make it somewhat boring.
i hope you really start taking into consideration what feedback i've been giving, because from last mixtape to this it seems you didn't, which is fine if this is how you always wanna sound and flow, but the lyrical ability and rhyming ability (also you have pretty good mixing which is better than most people like you and me doing this music shit) you have needs to be utilized better, and thats the best advice i can give you. keep working hard
......it almost seemed like every song pretty much had the same message tbh....bar 1 or 2 tracks....



chambers wrote:with that being said it was better then your last mixtape (i disagree with emady on that)...
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren






Tash8 wrote:yea i agree i remember i used to bump these three songs from you all the fuckn time
sick of this
fallin' apart
and there was another one but i forgot the name....ur hooks used to be dope as fuck man...you used to say shit that i wanted to hear..now you kinda tried to go complex and that kinda ruined the enjoyability...though it was still a good album...



Steve Spag wrote:Tash8 wrote:yea i agree i remember i used to bump these three songs from you all the fuckn time
sick of this
fallin' apart
and there was another one but i forgot the name....ur hooks used to be dope as fuck man...you used to say shit that i wanted to hear..now you kinda tried to go complex and that kinda ruined the enjoyability...though it was still a good album...
LOL, my old stuff was garbage. I don't know how you guys like that crap lmao.
The only good thing about my older tracks were my quality, but everything other than that has been improved.
Oh, and Emady, I think you'll be diggin' the emotion in the next CD I put out (more info on that soon).

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