**2nd Single** C-Riz - I'm Still Fly

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release date coming closer....but still have no exact date just mid april or something..
well here's my 2nd Single...hope ya enjoy it...
i know its not what people like on this forum..but give it a listen

C-Riz - I'm Still Fly
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YouTube and Myspace links on the way! enjoy

[Jay-19]

At first, the hook sounds off, but then the flow catches up again, and turns out to be really good in my opinion!
I really like these kind of tracks, the lyrics and the attitude.
Your second verse is way better than the first, you sound more confident.
The outro is cocky, good shit!

Overall, sweet track man.
You should rap like you did on the 2nd verse more often.

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thanks jay

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

"i got that paper work thats straight up mean" ?


stop being fake

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hey i get 40 euro pocket money a month..
and "...straight up me" but yeah its kool bar...
i already knew which people will slay this track
meh we never agree on this subject so thanks for checkin

[B.A.D.]

C-Riz is a Big Tymer hahahaha

I detect a slight lag starting from the second hook before the first verse, make sure that its ok, but I think all the pellas starting from the first verse are half a sec late. until hook 2, they go ok. Maybe its just me, but if it wasnt a lag problem it means you flowed it bad.

anywaes, I did enjoyed the track, I like it, verse 2 was the best, lmao at the chopped n screwed part. what I like most of this track is that you liked it, and when you enjoy doing it and feel good about it, the listener can feel that.

plus its a fun track, even if lyrically its not your verse, thats hot.. plus Its been a while since I listen to this type of tracks so feels cool that u bringin it back haha.

good song

[Mr. Chambers]

meh...i never liked this track....

i never liked these type of tracks

and i especially don't like it when ppl "pretend"......you don't have a nice car...unless your mom or dad got it for you...=\...but that still doesn't mean its your money

i dunno...seemed like you had fun...but it just ain't my type of shit....seemed fake......and i don't like when ppl ain't themselves in their music

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thanks to both...
and yeah no need to defend myself..but it comes down to havin fun with it.....
was serious long enough...for now i enjoy rappin without any pressure
anywayz..i kinda knew that such tracks doesnt appeal to everyone...

thanks again...i promise as soon i got this "tryout mixtape" out ( english) i go do some more serious stuff again

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

its not really about being serious, serious music isnt always great just coz its serious.

but this isnt a joke/fun song, it never comes across as you joking about and having some fun, i do joke songs all the time i did an arab money remix for a laugh...its just about how you do it.

you can do the "im so fly" concept easily without saying you "get paper".

your style on these comes across and a really big attempt on american gangsta rap and not the good ice cube gangsta rap the dipset fake gangsta rap.

so i mean if your doing a concept of fake gangsta rap on a beat that sounds like its fake gangsta rap..and performing it is a middle class white german guy...it just throws everything off and is not enjoyable..

experimenting yeh man, but if your gonni do this be more creative and not just someone being fake doing something that is fake to start with.

no hate, but it really ruins the image of you when you put out a good song knowing you do songs like this

[Tash8]

i love this song...hook is dope as fuckk....verse 2 is amazing, never thought you could rap like this..nice
i like the bridge..damn i just really like this track.very catchy good job c-riz!

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thanks tash

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and bumpin

[Kez]

I agree with Bar with regards to subject matter, can't get into stuff that isn't real really but that's just personal preference. The hook is catchy-ish even though your singing aint exactly amazing, it does its job pretty well. I have no doubt that the beat makes this song most enjoyable, it's a good beat. I see your mixing is off at times, like your hooks are slightly different in timing, but w.e it's not that bad. As for the verses, well the lyrics are nothing special really, pretty basic. Nothing that really pulled me in or surprised me. Flow for the most part is decent, i still feel you have this thing where you have big pauses where you just drag the line out by repeating the word you stopped at, for example at 1:19 and i dunno if it's intentional or not but it can be seen as a sign of a gappy flow. But there's other times where your flow is pulled off well like in the pause in verse 1, that flowed perfectly with the gap. Your delivery is good enough in terms of emotion and pulling off the image, but i still notice this thing where your accent makes it sound strange when you start off words, like sometimes you finish a word and transition into the next sentence and it sounds weird cause of your accent. I know that's probably something you can't change since you know must be hard rapping in English and being German, but it's just somethin i have always picked up on lol. Your words are still clear enough to hear though which is a good thing. And the quality sounds great, i can't pick up any issues, but then again what do i know about quality

Overall it was a decent track, i'm really not a fan of the content but taking it as a song on its own merits it wasn't terrible. The hook was catchy and your flow for the most part rode the beat (which was well selected) well. Lyrics didn't impress me though, but w.e. It was a good enough track but i hope your tape will have some variation.

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thanks kez for tryin to be objective

[Nick. Y]

man I get it that this track is for fun,so the subject matter is fine by me.Verses sound decent I guess, but your singing at the chorus sounds false.That's my opinion