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!!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

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!!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 19th, '10, 20:20

So here's the second single off of The All On Me EP which is dropping real soon.
I'm really happy with this track, and the ones who've heard it have said it's probably my best track ever.
The hook was already on the beat, and I fucking fell in love with it, so I had to spit on it.
Enjoy!

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Jay-19 - All On Me.mp3 - 3.04MB

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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby theJFKshow » Apr 19th, '10, 20:30

I love the chorus, but the lyrics are really bad.
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Almostlity » Apr 19th, '10, 20:32

Damn, i'll download it now and listen it tomorrow morning :y: :y:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 19th, '10, 21:02

theJFKshow wrote:I love the chorus, but the lyrics are really bad.


You love to bash me, don't you?
At least you can give me some constructive feedback.
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 20th, '10, 08:02

that sounds like the Cryptic Wisdom guy on the hook

eewwww... no. I dont like your swag here hahahhaha. the flow is amazing, you rode the beat really really cool hahaha. but yeah haha, Im nodding to this

definitively downloading ur tape when its out

I liked the track a lot, your mixing sounds very clean too, what do you do?

still nodding :worship:

btw, holla at me when ur ready to record. I got one ready :y:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 20th, '10, 11:25

damn love the hook...
but yeah your attitude doesnt fit here...did you say the n-word?
thats your 1st track of this type...you should practise such tracks before...
but from flow and energy its all good...loved the 3rd verse tho :y:
nice track choice..defo banger potential for your EP
im gettin more and more excited :worship:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 20th, '10, 12:02

Thanks for the feed Ax-D and Chris! Appreciate it a lot. :b:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Recovery2010 » Apr 20th, '10, 12:36

Big fan of this song, the only song I've heard from you but definitely going to check out more of your shit and get that mixtape! Nice flow and I agree with Big Ax with your mixing, what do you use though?
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 20th, '10, 12:52

Recovery2010 wrote:Big fan of this song, the only song I've heard from you but definitely going to check out more of your shit and get that mixtape! Nice flow and I agree with Big Ax with your mixing, what do you use though?


About the mixing.
It's pretty much different from track to track, I just fuck around in Audition 1.5 and see what sounds good to me. But usually, I don't use too much effects and stuff, I try to keep it as simple as I can.

Thanks for the comment man, appreciated! :b:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Recovery2010 » Apr 20th, '10, 13:07

Jay-19 wrote:
Recovery2010 wrote:Big fan of this song, the only song I've heard from you but definitely going to check out more of your shit and get that mixtape! Nice flow and I agree with Big Ax with your mixing, what do you use though?


About the mixing.
It's pretty much different from track to track, I just fuck around in Audition 1.5 and see what sounds good to me. But usually, I don't use too much effects and stuff, I try to keep it as simple as I can.

Thanks for the comment man, appreciated! :b:


No worries man, have you tried Cool Edit Pro 2.0? Its downloadable and its simple but so affective and easy to use, probably my favourite.
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 20th, '10, 13:13

Recovery2010 wrote:
Jay-19 wrote:
Recovery2010 wrote:Big fan of this song, the only song I've heard from you but definitely going to check out more of your shit and get that mixtape! Nice flow and I agree with Big Ax with your mixing, what do you use though?


About the mixing.
It's pretty much different from track to track, I just fuck around in Audition 1.5 and see what sounds good to me. But usually, I don't use too much effects and stuff, I try to keep it as simple as I can.

Thanks for the comment man, appreciated! :b:


No worries man, have you tried Cool Edit Pro 2.0? Its downloadable and its simple but so affective and easy to use, probably my favourite.


Yeah, it's basically the same thing as Audition. :smoking:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Tornado » Apr 20th, '10, 15:25

Didn't expec this kind of track, but your usual aggressive delievery didn't suit the track for me cause your flow was altering from slow at the beginning to fast at the end, made some words a little bit unclear 1st time listening. Got to love the chorus though, the highlight and i'd say this is 6/10 track cos i know i've heard better but still looking foward to the EP :smoking:
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 20th, '10, 21:16

Thanks for checkin' it out Tornado.
And I understand why some of you didn't really like the track, it's okay though.
I tried some different styles on this EP to "find myself", and I hope you'll like the other tracks better when it drops. :8)
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jaz » Apr 20th, '10, 21:56

Haha it always seems weird to me when I hear someone else on a beat I did a track to in the past..

Anyway, you flow pretty solid on this.. The only thing I could think of that might help it is some kind of overdubs or mixing techniques that would help match the vocals to the chorus more. This was actually one of my worst mixed songs, so I can't really help too much there though.

Keep it up though man
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Re: !!Second Single!! Jay-19 - All On Me

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 20th, '10, 22:00

Thanks for the feed Jaz! :b:
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