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i gave up on you

Postby hottone123 » Jan 18th, '06, 03:00

I gave up on you,
You through away my love,
Like it was nothing,
I like her more than you,
I did not think that would happen,
I just wanted to say that,
sheis better than you,
she does not hit,
she does not say mean things,
she is so different from you,
I am so glad that I am over you,
Yes I did love you,
But love makes you do crazy things,
Yes I did love you,
But love makes you do crazy things,
Because you would try anything to keep them in your life,
For the one that you are loving,
I am so glad I gave up on you,
If I would have stayed with you,
I would probably be dead by now,
You beaded me till I was bleeding,
In my face,
I am so glad you are out of my life!!
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Postby AspirinE » Jan 18th, '06, 04:18

So wat teeenage pop group are u in?
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Postby Sunni » Jan 18th, '06, 04:23

Let's close down Creative Writing and Rap Battles.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 18th, '06, 04:42

shut up fry :zipped: lmao

we need it man :'( its part of what makes tr

and lmao at asp :happy:
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Postby Nick419 » Jan 18th, '06, 04:59

was that like something u made up or is it true about a dude beating u till u bleed (that dont sound right)
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 18th, '06, 05:01

i hope its real life shit otherwise this is what i refer to as michael jackson rap.


















Cause its about as real as his nose...
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Postby Nick419 » Jan 18th, '06, 05:02

lol...........yeah and i wouldnt call that rap.
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Postby Rae » Feb 13th, '06, 01:29

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! i know EXACTLY what it feels like to have that aply to me. i hope that really didnt happen to you. b/c ur really talented. :D i could never come up the the perfect words like you did for that situation!
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 13th, '06, 01:43

but still lmao @ asp :laughing:
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Postby NEVER ENOUGH » Feb 13th, '06, 15:57

that was realy nice and sounds like real
u ve got ur own way in writing :happy:
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Postby DOPE » Feb 13th, '06, 17:26

come on dawg that wasnt bad!


but yo Sunni talk about closin down creative writting n rap battles again, ima sock you in ur fuckin textual face,,, (Cuz i cant see ur real one)
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 13th, '06, 18:01

but yo Sunni talk about closin down creative writting n rap battles again, ima sock you in ur fuckin textual face,,, (Cuz i cant see ur real one)



dude you took your pills?

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Postby Tomega » Feb 13th, '06, 18:40

I think you used the word you so much that you probably never can think of other words again.. damn no i got it you eh.. too.. you you you
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Postby Tomega » Feb 13th, '06, 18:42

$0 R3@L wrote:
but yo Sunni talk about closin down creative writting n rap battles again, ima sock you in ur fuckin textual face,,, (Cuz i cant see ur real one)



dude you took your pills?

:unsure:


why would he call himself DOPE then?
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