Sajjad - When Will They Learn (Prod by Sajjad)

[Xray]

Guess who's back!!!

It's not a full song yet, only a verse and a hook so far. I wanted peoples input cause I been so out of it lately I can't depend on my judgement alone. Beat/vocals produced/mixed in FL and mastered in Cool Edit. First time I mix a track in FL and its fucking dope. I don't know why I didn't do it sooner. Gonna have to wait for the tape for the final track.

Verse One

S.A The Devil break a bone for your title
Break into your kingdom and then I'll fuckin slap you
Get outta my path view, these motherfuckers hatin
You've reached your limitation, now motherfucker quit achin
Always instigatin never patient now your foul
Find you hangin up a tree next to owls screamin owe!
I don't know officer, I found him right there
lookin quite scared as he was running outta air
Then I ran somewhere, cause I seen another man
wearing a trench coat with a pissy bloody hand
I couldn't see his face, it was raining as hell
In a rage with a blade as he went for the kill
I made a fuckin noise then he knew it I was there
He heard my voice so he definitely stared
He said "Tell the police anything and you're dead"
You know what officer? Fuck this shit! (I'm out)

Chorus
When when when when
Will these motherfuckers learn (learn learn learn)

Your bitch don't know
Your fam don't know
These kids don't know
so go ahead and tell them
go ahead and tell them, tell them, tell them

When when when when
will these motherfuckers (hook cuts)

Please leave feedback on the beat as well. Thanks and enjoy.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/756591623c76581f/
http://usershare.net/ieuivcppu9lb

[Almostlity]

dope, beat is quite simple but its working Lyrics are dope imo and your flow and delivery are on point.. Wasn't feeling that hook that much but its aight

8/10.

[Xray]

Thanks bro.

[gutawafang]

Sick storytelling man. It would make a good video.

[Tranquil]

the beat is just love it, nice kind of dark theme the verse is just hands down great, love it, the delivery the flow its just all dope .. man i love the chores, "when these mother fuckas learn" hahaha, love it man cant wait till you finish it

[Robbie G]

Damn dude, you killed it.

Your voice/delivery/flow were perfect for the beat, it just all came to together really nicely. The chorus was nice as well, my favorite part is when your like" his bitch don't know, his wife don't know...so go ahead and tell them..."

Finish this

P.S, u got links to any of your other stuff? mixtapes, albums or singles?

much appriciated

When I get home later I can upload his EP.

but for now check this track:

http://www.mediafire.com/?y05u5zalmma

The first verse is Sticcy who's also dope and Sajjads on the hook and second verse. Has to be one of the dopest songs ever dropped on TR.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

heard way better...mixing was dry...delivery was allright
lyrics are fine..nuttin spectacular tho...bottom line
good to see ya back

[Le Tunisien]

the flow,delivery are definetly dope...i loved it,this song awesome only thing i didnt feel was the hook honestly and the beat like it has been said is simple but pretty cool , i liked it
glad to hear u'r back sajj.one of the best here !

[Xray]

Thanks a lot guys. Really appreciate it.

Wow this was insane lol, i knew that u were good ( word of mouth on here ) but never really heard your stuff untill this and definatly loved it, cant wait for you to complete it


P.S, u got links to any of your other stuff? mixtapes, albums or singles?

much appriciated

Yeah I can link you to my 2007 mixtape, sorry cause that's all I got uploaded on the net atm.

http://bornaloneridealone.bravehost.com ... EPART1.rar
http://bornaloneridealonepart2.bravehos ... EPART2.rar

And you can check my myspace page Click Here, it has some other tracks, although I don't update that page anymore. Lost interest in that site. Anyways yeah, check that out and let me know what you think bro. I appreciate you willing to take the time man. Respect.

[Xray]

Thanks for the input Coleon, yeah it is kinda put sloppily since most horror movies got that kinda feel, but that's all I tried to do there. Tried to setup a simple and understanding introduction to setup the rest of the song. I'll think about it though.

@ Steven - Hope you like it bro.

[Xray]

Haha you're the first person to say that, everyone else told me otherwise about that song.

Glad you liked it bro.

[Robbie G]

his EP

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[Xray]

Thanks Rob.

[_Ironic_]

I think it's time me and you got on a track together...holla @ me if ur down on PM.


i enjoyed this...very musical, and it meshed together very well.

pretty short though but it's whatev...

check out my track numb the pain if u can bro. appreciated

[Tornado]

Short but sweet, sounds like it could develop into some storytelling shit man....looking foward to more