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Postby TripleNineThree » May 9th, '10, 21:44

Me n my boy Chane decided to do a track one night, nothing else to do

Chanes on the first verse and on the hook, I'm on the 2nd verse

Listen/Download link- http://www.zshare.net/audio/7588792082bf6378/


Lyrics for my verse

Smile up on my face cuz homie this life is so great
I don't need to go catch a case to prove to you, that I'm not fake

...I live my life by grace and thats the base I don't need to get payed
cuz I'm satisfied by seekin his face he gave me pace when I'm runnin the race

Money I don't eva chase, all my idols have been erased
I feel so good and I feel so high my life is up in the sky so fly

But not off weed, or from my ride, thats not why I'm satisfied
Now you think that is the saddest lie, but you neva gave God a try

See if we turned away then we could get played on the radio every single day
But thats not why I write n thats not the way that I wanna get known through the words I say

...Before this song I prayed for the lyrics to come to my mind
And He did just that, with every rhyme I love this fabulous life of mine


Drop a link and I'll return the feed ASAP
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Re: Fabulous

Postby theJFKshow » May 9th, '10, 22:04

:y: :y: :y:

Really well put together, could be a #1 single on iTunes. Chorus and verses were great. I'd suggest turning up the volume of the verses a little bit though, I couldn't understand some of it. The contrast between your voices is good. Let me know if you guys ever want to collab.
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Re: Fabulous

Postby TripleNineThree » May 9th, '10, 22:07

theJFKshow wrote::y: :y: :y:

Really well put together, could be a #1 single on iTunes. Chorus and verses were great. I'd suggest turning up the volume of the verses a little bit though, I couldn't understand some of it. The contrast between your voices is good. Let me know if you guys ever want to collab.


Thanks a lot for the feed! I'll let you know when we have a verse that needs to be filled!!
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Re: Fabulous

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 9th, '10, 22:24

man ,, that's sick ,, i liked the beat ,, its hot,, chrous is dope ,, really ,, mixing was good,, talking bout ya verse,, ya flowed very well, but it was not stable,, delivery is great ,, i liked the lyrics content,, so ya ,, it's a sick track ,,,,,keep doin ya thing ,, :y:
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Re: Fabulous

Postby Le Tunisien » May 9th, '10, 22:59

first of all..i really like this beat, its dope :y:

hmm the hook is very dope indeed i like it :y: your flow was there,delivery was ok i enjoyed it..dope song overall , the lyrics were ok even though u use simple rhymes ,it meant somethin and thats the purpose of rap :y: :y: :y: keeep it up
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Re: Fabulous

Postby TripleNineThree » May 9th, '10, 23:50

Appreciate the feed everyone!! :y:
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Re: Fabulous

Postby youngfire420 » May 10th, '10, 03:01

You make good music dude. Ive listened to all the songs you've posted on here. I enjoy them all. :y:
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Re: Fabulous

Postby TripleNineThree » May 10th, '10, 04:56

youngfire420 wrote:You make good music dude. Ive listened to all the songs you've posted on here. I enjoy them all. :y:


:y: :y: :y: Thanks for the support fam! Drop a link or two of your stuff I'll check it out and give you some feed if you want
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Re: Fabulous

Postby Tranquil » May 10th, '10, 05:10

:o the beat is dope... love the chores... "this life is fabulous :guitar: " haha, the first verse was dope, lovin the flow.. and same to the 2nd verse (you) altogether this track is great.. i could see this being in the top 10 on iTunes, lol, sounds professional.. you got any more music? ;)
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Re: Fabulous

Postby TripleNineThree » May 10th, '10, 05:25

EminemIsLegend wrote::o the beat is dope... love the chores... "this life is fabulous :guitar: " haha, the first verse was dope, lovin the flow.. and same to the 2nd verse (you) altogether this track is great.. i could see this being in the top 10 on iTunes, lol, sounds professional.. you got any more music? ;)


Whoa man thanks for the support!! And yeah I deff. do you can check out more of my music at http://www.reverbnation.com/tripleninethree

I have a mixtape coming out May 29th and so does Chane. We are gonna do a lil small tour and promote it send an email to tripleninethree@gmail.com and I can get you both of em, we givin em out for free

Thanks again for the support!
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Re: Fabulous

Postby _Ironic_ » May 10th, '10, 05:48

honestly bro, i sat down here to write i feed, but i can't really give u an accurate one cuz i wasn't listening super in depth

i played it twice though, and it had a real smooth sound to it, and it sounds polished,
it's pretty enjoyable as well, don't get me wrong, that's the main reason why i wasnt listening in depth, is cuz i was enjoying it. so ups :y: :y:

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Re: Fabulous

Postby TripleNineThree » May 11th, '10, 04:14

@ Ironic

Thanks for the feed fam! I really appreciate it, expecially from someone on your level!
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Re: Fabulous

Postby TripleNineThree » May 12th, '10, 05:50

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Thanks for the feed man! Lecrae and Trip Lee are both of our top two favorite rappers haha so thats awesome you reconized that. Its also awesome that you know who they are

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haha, thanks for the feed!
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