Loser (Produced by Hala-x)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.hotshare.net/audio/259459-6209861c81.html

fuck critics.....i put em in their place//
green with envy......go and pull a weird face//
look....i'm tired...and i'm just floatin in space//
life got me faced with feelin hopeless N wasted//
everyone can tell me my life...not like i'm sellin it right?//
no...i fell through the pipes...of hell in a fight//
between bad and evil...even being mad at people//
i ask myself if i felt impolite//
no....i'm anti-social...and i'm hopeful//
that some day people will demand my flow rolls//
with the punches...i got wit in the bunches//
my wit in punches don't seem to fit in with the punch ins//
the hunches only sit in with the brunches//
eat up certainty......so i give in to the lunches//
which only means i'm starvin to dinners//
my bars desert foes....so i start as the winner//
what is he saying?...you could bring ya whole force field//
and still get turned to a full coarse meal//
think you bossing...cmon dog...you otta retire//
turn this into saute and get tossed in the fire//

i never once claimed to be balling it up//
i never started shit...never callin him up//
once a bitch...your always repelled from the change//
i'ma tornado with skill....you in the cellar to hang//
he's hella deranged....cuz he fell and complained//
about bullshit thats outdated......yellin the same//
hold up....now adays your whole style is flipped//
like he's a some kinda bitch magnet...wild as shit//
remember big man....you don't receed from ya past//
remember...people in your past was beatin ya ass//
haha...cuz i remember you tellin me shit//
i brought you the hype.....but your hella convinced//
but fa real..i think i remain awfully composed//
a sicker wordsmith with a cocky approach//
you can stop with the show//
cuz now i'm starting to see why your pops moved to the opposite coast//.....hoe

just something to work on my mixing and get used to my mixer.....more concerned about that then anything

[classthe_king]

Mixing sounded good. Wasn't really feeling the beat or the way you went with the track but you had good lyrics and your rhymes were dope as normal

[B.A.D.]

this is a beat I could never picture you on, but you did it nice,
you had the same problem as me in some lines get rushed and affects the flow. it was like 2 lines on the first verse and the last 4 lines of the second. other than that it all flows smooth and great.

with the punches...i got wit in the bunches//
my wit in punches don't seem to fit in with the punch ins//

this one (I dont know how to type the "<<" facing up).. is a great everything, I know its a personal punch, its an overal great punch, you flow it sick, and you used a very cool type of rhyming in there, hmm like a "same word multi's" I dunno, I replayed the song to listen to that again.

great track. good diss. plus i agree with you on this one.

now the mixing, I see you used something completely diferent from what u used on "natural born hustler"... this sounds less bassy and more dry, while the other one sounded more omnious and wet. still, I can't make up my mind to which is better. but hmm.. gotta keep using diferent settings until you hit the right one.

great short track.

[Mr. Chambers]

good looks on the feedback fellas

[Mr. Chambers]

you guys suck dick.

[DƎRDYPK]

I like it bro
not the kind of beat I could imagine you rapping over
but I like it
well worth a download
HalaX makes dope beats
& I can't wait to hear Suck It Bitch 2

[gutawafang]

the beat is not bad. I like the mixing, as usual. It's very good. And the lyrics are dope too. Nice one man.

[Tornado]

As far as the track goes, it's like, there's nothing you did wrong from flow, delievery whatever, lyrics were cool and i thought it was nicely mixed aswell. It was just the beat, it's different i give them that but i couldn't vibe to the track at all. Technically, there's no fault but i not really fond of it..this with a different beat would be fire

[Mr. Chambers]

^ i understand that....i made this song knowing that it wouldn't please everyone...but thanks for checking...i appreciate it......

[Mr. Chambers]

YAY...fucking squares!

[Jaz]

Okay, so I haven't heard a ton of stuff from you, but this is very different style beat then I've heard you use. Lyrics are pretty straight. Delivery sounds pretty good, but I think vocal volume might be low.

As for mixing, I'd have to hear it a little louder to know for sure, but it sounds good
The second verse sounds a little more on-point as for volume, and the mixing sounds good.