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Re: No 50

Postby TheShadyest » Jun 9th, '10, 05:21

BrainsGambino wrote:
Tash8 wrote:what does that have anything to do with this verse:

Throw dirt on me and grow a wildflower
But it's "fuck the world", get a child out her
Yeah, my life a bitch, but you know nothing bout her
Been to hell and back, I can show you vouchers
I'm rolling Sweets, I'm smoking sour
Married to the game but she broke her vows
That's why my bars are full of broken bottles
And my night stands are full of open Bibles
I think about more than I forget
But I don't go around fire expecting not to sweat
And these ***** know I lay them down, make their bed
Bitches try to kick me while I'm down: I'll break your leg
Money outweighing problems on the triple beam
I'm sticking to the script, you ***** skipping scenes
Be good or be good at it
Fucking right I've got my gun, semi-Cartermatic
Yeah, put a dick in their mouth, so I guess it's "fuck what they say"
I'm high as a bitch: up, up and away
Man, I come down in a couple of days
OK, you want me up in the cage, then I'll come out in beast mode
I got this world stuck in the safe, combination is the G-code
It's Weezy motherfucker, blood gang and I'm in bleed mode
All about my dough but I don't even check the peephole
So you can keep knocking but won't knock me down
No love lost, no love found


First four lines, absolutely no internal rhyme scheme, like it's the motherfucking LATE SEVENTIES. Then for some reason he begins the next bar with the same, one-rhyme-at-the-end-of-the-line bullshit as the first bar, which is fine, but after that first line he immediately CEASES TO RHYME. If you're going to use the forced "vows" metaphor in that line, why use "sour" before it. Sour does not rhyme with vows no matter how hard he tries to contort the delivery. Bottles and Bibles is also forced, but fine. Think about more than I forget shit has been used countless times in far more creative ways. And once again he's back to rhyming once at the end of every bar, something Em even sneers at in one of the other tracks on this album. The only two lines that really connected from then on out were the up up and away, come down in a few days, and the flow was absent.

Simplistic shit, and it still happens to be one of his best verses since he blew up. I was a fan through Go DJ. Then he mysteriously forgot how to rap ENTIRELY.


i agree... He just says simple shit.. dat doesent even rhyme.. That people can understand in the 1st listen.. unlike eminem where ur saying.. i dont get what he said.. go look at it.. ohh shit he meant that.. just like the " yelling attack like i just stepped on 1" i had no clue wtf he was talking about my 1st few listens.. im like dat doesent make any sense.. but now i do.. and like wow..

but wayne says.. " I think about more then i forget" and the world goes ape shit :facepalm
And I don't care how many gangsta rap songs you listen to
Or the fact you smoke weed and pack a gun, I see the bitch in you


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Re: No 50

Postby BrainsGambino » Jun 9th, '10, 05:22

Hahhhaha
And we are the best
And weezy be the shhh
Like two H's after S
I got these niggas on shhh like I gon deaf
And I'm right right
And your wrong left
Hahahahaha
Check out this bizarre
I am regularly irregular
Khaled best DJ
Weezy best rapper
If khaled say it's a movie then weezy best actor


Holy SHIT. The above verse is actual published material from The Worst of All Time. He really did say "And I'm right right, And your wrong left. Hahahahaha."

He really did. He also, at one point, said
get ur rain coat i make it flood, ur gonna need a boat...


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Re: No 50

Postby Tash8 » Jun 9th, '10, 05:25

BrainsGambino wrote:First four lines, absolutely no internal rhyme scheme, like it's the motherfucking LATE SEVENTIES. Then for some reason he begins the next bar with the same, one-rhyme-at-the-end-of-the-line bullshit as the first bar, which is fine, but after that first line he immediately CEASES TO RHYME. If you're going to use the forced "vows" metaphor in that line, why use "sour" before it. Sour does not rhyme with vows no matter how hard he tries to contort the delivery. Bottles and Bibles is also forced, but fine. Think about more than I forget shit has been used countless times in far more creative ways. And once again he's back to rhyming once at the end of every bar, something Em even sneers at in one of the other tracks on this album. The only two lines that really connected from then on out were the up up and away, come down in a few days, and the flow was absent.

Simplistic shit, and it still happens to be one of his best verses since he blew up. I was a fan through Go DJ. Then he mysteriously forgot how to rap ENTIRELY.



are you stupid or what?

I could completely dissect the verse and prove you wrong but you seem like one of this idiots who will never learn.
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Re: No 50

Postby BrainsGambino » Jun 9th, '10, 05:27

Tash8 wrote:
BrainsGambino wrote:First four lines, absolutely no internal rhyme scheme, like it's the motherfucking LATE SEVENTIES. Then for some reason he begins the next bar with the same, one-rhyme-at-the-end-of-the-line bullshit as the first bar, which is fine, but after that first line he immediately CEASES TO RHYME. If you're going to use the forced "vows" metaphor in that line, why use "sour" before it. Sour does not rhyme with vows no matter how hard he tries to contort the delivery. Bottles and Bibles is also forced, but fine. Think about more than I forget shit has been used countless times in far more creative ways. And once again he's back to rhyming once at the end of every bar, something Em even sneers at in one of the other tracks on this album. The only two lines that really connected from then on out were the up up and away, come down in a few days, and the flow was absent.

Simplistic shit, and it still happens to be one of his best verses since he blew up. I was a fan through Go DJ. Then he mysteriously forgot how to rap ENTIRELY.



are you stupid or what?

I could completely dissect the verse and prove you wrong but you seem like one of this idiots who will never learn.


One of the idiots who will never learn that a slow-mo simplistic rapper who doesn't exactly enjoy RHYMING and pumps most of his crybaby shit through heavy autotune is somehow having a POSITIVE effect on hip-hop?
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Re: No 50

Postby Tash8 » Jun 9th, '10, 05:29

I'm not talking about hip hop or his other verses. I'm talking about this one SPECIFICALLY..if you think dre or 50 cent or even d12 could have come harder...then i think u need to take a listen to Crack a Bottle again
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Re: No 50

Postby kindafeelslikedejavu » Jun 9th, '10, 05:29

Tash8 wrote:so the guy you hate on so much...could possibly have one of the best verses on Recovery..and you're still hating?

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My songs can make you cry, take you by surprise
And at the same time, make you dry your eyes with the same rhyme
See what you're seeing is a genius at work
Which to me isn't work, so it's easy to misinterpret it at first,
Cuz when i speak, it's tongue in cheek
I'd yank my fuckin teeth before id ever bite my tongue
I'd slice my gums, get struck by fuckin' lightning twice at once
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Re: No 50

Postby kindafeelslikedejavu » Jun 9th, '10, 05:30

BrainsGambino wrote:
Tash8 wrote:
BrainsGambino wrote:First four lines, absolutely no internal rhyme scheme, like it's the motherfucking LATE SEVENTIES. Then for some reason he begins the next bar with the same, one-rhyme-at-the-end-of-the-line bullshit as the first bar, which is fine, but after that first line he immediately CEASES TO RHYME. If you're going to use the forced "vows" metaphor in that line, why use "sour" before it. Sour does not rhyme with vows no matter how hard he tries to contort the delivery. Bottles and Bibles is also forced, but fine. Think about more than I forget shit has been used countless times in far more creative ways. And once again he's back to rhyming once at the end of every bar, something Em even sneers at in one of the other tracks on this album. The only two lines that really connected from then on out were the up up and away, come down in a few days, and the flow was absent.

Simplistic shit, and it still happens to be one of his best verses since he blew up. I was a fan through Go DJ. Then he mysteriously forgot how to rap ENTIRELY.



are you stupid or what?

I could completely dissect the verse and prove you wrong but you seem like one of this idiots who will never learn.


One of the idiots who will never learn that a slow-mo simplistic rapper who doesn't exactly enjoy RHYMING and pumps most of his crybaby shit through heavy autotune is somehow having a POSITIVE effect on hip-hop?



please "dissect" it for us....
My songs can make you cry, take you by surprise
And at the same time, make you dry your eyes with the same rhyme
See what you're seeing is a genius at work
Which to me isn't work, so it's easy to misinterpret it at first,
Cuz when i speak, it's tongue in cheek
I'd yank my fuckin teeth before id ever bite my tongue
I'd slice my gums, get struck by fuckin' lightning twice at once
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Re: No 50

Postby Tash8 » Jun 9th, '10, 05:34

Throw dirt on me and grow a wildflower
But it's "fuck the world", get a child out her
Yeah, my life a bitch, but you know nothing bout her
Been to hell and back, I can show you vouchers
I'm rolling Sweets, I'm smoking sour
Married to the game but she broke her vows
That's why my bars are full of broken bottles
And my night stands are full of open Bibles
I think about more than I forget
But I don't go around fire expecting not to sweat
And these ***** know I lay them down, make their bed
Bitches try to kick me while I'm down: I'll break your leg
Money outweighing problems on the triple beam
I'm sticking to the script, you ***** skipping scenes
Be good or be good at it
Fucking right I've got my gun, semi-Cartermatic
Yeah, put a dick in their mouth, so I guess it's "fuck what they say"
I'm high as a bitch: up, up and away
Man, I come down in a couple of days
OK, you want me up in the cage, then I'll come out in beast mode
I got this world stuck in the safe, combination is the G-code
It's Weezy motherfucker, blood gang and I'm in bleed mode
All about my dough but I don't even check the peephole
So you can keep knocking but won't knock me down
No love lost, no love found


ok sooo u were saying he didn't have any syllables?
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Re: No 50

Postby BrainsGambino » Jun 9th, '10, 05:46

Tash8 wrote:Throw dirt on me and grow a wildflower
But it's "fuck the world", get a child out her
Yeah, my life a bitch, but you know nothing bout her
Been to hell and back, I can show you vouchers
I'm rolling Sweets, I'm smoking sour
Married to the game but she broke her vows
That's why my bars are full of broken bottles
And my night stands are full of open Bibles
I think about more than I forget
But I don't go around fire expecting not to sweat
And these ***** know I lay them down, make their bed
Bitches try to kick me while I'm down: I'll break your leg
Money outweighing problems on the triple beam
I'm sticking to the script, you ***** skipping scenes
Be good or be good at it
Fucking right I've got my gun, semi-Cartermatic
Yeah, put a dick in their mouth, so I guess it's "fuck what they say"
I'm high as a bitch: up, up and away
Man, I come down in a couple of days
OK, you want me up in the cage, then I'll come out in beast mode
I got this world stuck in the safe, combination is the G-code
It's Weezy motherfucker, blood gang and I'm in bleed mode
All about my dough but I don't even check the peephole
So you can keep knocking but won't knock me down
No love lost, no love found


ok sooo u were saying he didn't have any syllables?


I said it's his best verse in a long time and yes, his rhyme scheme is tortuously simplistic, even here, where he barely forces out a rhyme at the end of each line. As if Rakim never existed. As if he never listened to a classic Eminem verse in his life.

He picks out some very very poor ideas for punchlines and throws them together side-by-side. "I'm sticking to the script ... you're skipping scenes." What the hell is he playing on? The fact that movie scripts, indeed, contain scenes? Compare that to this line from a CLEVER artist "Been a convict, ask Akon ... Had blocks locked, ask Avon." The flow is simple, yet it fits, and the wordplay is CLEVER.

Smoking sour, broke her vows. That's 4 and 3. Syllable count! It's the most basic thing in the fucking world! YOU rap better than this guy. Congratulations. YOU, who may never have rapped in his life, rap better than the supposed "greatest of all time" without a doubt.
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Re: No 50

Postby LilWayne4Life » Jun 9th, '10, 06:04

Spyder wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I love how everyone hates Lil Wayne and now he does a song on Em's album and they love him :laughing:


still hate him


and verse wasnt good at all, the DTW from his was better


Keyword is "Hate" rather then dislike, it's like some of you eminem fans have hatred built inside you from wayne when you don't even know the guy personally.

Sad :facepalm
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Re: No 50

Postby BrainsGambino » Jun 9th, '10, 06:14

LilWayne4Life wrote:
Spyder wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I love how everyone hates Lil Wayne and now he does a song on Em's album and they love him :laughing:


still hate him


and verse wasnt good at all, the DTW from his was better


Keyword is "Hate" rather then dislike, it's like some of you eminem fans have hatred built inside you from wayne when you don't even know the guy personally.

Sad :facepalm


Sorry, I'll love him to bits. Even though he destroyed my favorite genre of music and directly lowered the bar, dragging down the level of quality lyricism that fans find acceptable (or "greatest of all time" for that matter). I'll just smile and giggle with him through all his slow motion electrofuck verses.
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Re: No 50

Postby Eazy-GFX » Jun 9th, '10, 06:17

I'm not a huge fan of Wayne but I liked him on the No Love track... to be honest I thought I wasn't going to like the track. :y:
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Re: No 50

Postby slimsoxshady » Jun 9th, '10, 06:30

i been ridin with Weezy ever since Em went MIA after Encore so all of you who all of a sudden like this Wayne verse missed out on some classics from him through the years...just sayin
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Re: No 50

Postby BrainsGambino » Jun 9th, '10, 06:40

slimsoxshady wrote:i been ridin with Weezy ever since Em went MIA after Encore so all of you who all of a sudden like this Wayne verse missed out on some classics from him through the years...just sayin


My favorite classic is the one where he says "I'm a pill popping' animal, syrup sipping nigga I'm so high you couldn't reach me with a fuckin antenna" Cuz get it? Antennas can extend, and I guess reach pretty high.

or

"My flow is sicker than a patient that is HIV Positive." Oh shit! HIV is indeed a sickness!

or

"I'ma bring the N.O. Back Like a nigga with no back"

and especially

"Better rapper than what covers your candy"

The dude's brain is a treasure-trove of deep lyrics and clever wordplay. He's a better rapper than what covers your candy. Get it? Cuz candy usually comes in a rapper, which is another word for an MC. How the fuck does he manage such brilliance?
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Re: No 50

Postby Eazy-GFX » Jun 9th, '10, 06:42

slimsoxshady wrote:i been ridin with Weezy ever since Em went MIA after Encore so all of you who all of a sudden like this Wayne verse missed out on some classics from him through the years...just sayin

I haven't listened to his work besides Drop the World... I liked that song. Sort of.

What are some good albums he has released?
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