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Free spit but the shit`s 2 expensive..............for you!!

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Free spit but the shit`s 2 expensive..............for you!!

Postby 4D » Aug 5th, '05, 12:18

This is a free spit but the shit`s 2 expensive,
Way too Nice, you pay da price when i`blitz thru defences
My spits so extensive you can`t grasp it,
You`d clasp it with both hands if you could handle it,
But you can`t, My rant`s got you manhandled shit,
I Brand asses with this, when i print it and laminate it,
U Wimps can`t incapsulate it, U boyz bin poisoned n contaminated
I`ve got ya quakin n shakin in ya loins an ya Can`t debate it,
infact ya hate that I`m the greatest, when i take my raps n spray it
And display it on the internet, got you fuckin mortified
I`m 4d, short for Fordie, short for Forde, short for Fortified,
But i`m not short in size, I`m big n` reinforced,
Read my post n you go white like you seen a ghost
You can`t contend with my pens wit, I`m Lyrical.
"What goes up must come down", Not me at my pinnacle,
Your despicable, people hate you, you`re a faggit
You`re reps gone, i`ve just stepped on a Maggot,
Your exo-skeleton`s squished, like yello Gelatin mixed
with Dirt on the bottom of my shoe.
when it comes to battles, i`ve labotomised a few,
I won`t apologize or Rue any diss i make,
It`s like Cannibus i take, when i smoke you like a joint
I Broke you like a point that was too thin on a pencil,
I ate you alive like i was chewin on a pretzel
When it comes to metephors my heads full
So i gotta unleash them and let the cunts out
I get ballistic when the pessimistic ones doubt,
They challenge my talent, but get beat like eggs
Me get beat is a feat, but, not feet like legs,
More like a miracle, hope ya can walk on water,
Massacres has occured when i talked on slaughter.
Stoppin da flow`s like puttin the stop cock in Niagra,
My rhymes are hard as an OAPs cock stockin viagra.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 6th, '05, 03:58

Broke you like a point that was too thin on a pencil,
I ate you alive like i was chewin on a pretzel


They challenge my talent, but get beat like eggs
Me get beat is a feat, but, not feet like legs,


Those made me laugh. and the rest was great too
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby 4D » Aug 6th, '05, 09:01

Thanks thomas, you`re opinion`s appreciated
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Postby Sunni » Aug 6th, '05, 09:03

good one FORDIE
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Postby 4D » Aug 6th, '05, 13:43

It was basically straight off the top of the head, i just started that Free spit line and ran with it.
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Postby egyemtee » Aug 12th, '05, 23:50

nice man i like it
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Postby Kirbee » Aug 13th, '05, 04:22

flowed nice... good job man
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Postby j_shady » Aug 13th, '05, 16:14

that shit was dope man...i like how you used your name in different kind of ways...good shit, keep it up man
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 19th, '05, 21:46

yo, nice shit, u should battle me son, check my raps i posted up like....3 or
4 of my raps peep dem out and challenge me ight????????????????????
??????????????????????????????????
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 19th, '05, 22:19

10 that is god shit right there
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Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 01:21

V-DogDaMenace wrote:yo, nice shit, u should battle me son, check my raps i posted up like....3 or
4 of my raps peep dem out and challenge me ight????????????????????
??????????????????????????????????


Oh o.k, i been in ur verses askin for a battle, didn`t see you ask in here.
I`ll set up the topic!!

P.s thanks to everyone for the props on the rhyme!!
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Postby irfman » Aug 21st, '05, 02:18

Fordie that was sick... you mind sendin me an acapella... i wanna mix this shite...
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