Liquid_Fangs VS slimEMshady

[slimEMshady]

Who goes first?

[classthe_king]

You called out, you go first

[Liquid_Fangs]

Can't wait all day

I know I'm the best, leave him broken, a mess
Can't beat this, Mafia 3-6....always smokin the S.E.S.
He's a clone, I'm a vet, can't best me at spitting
and he'll be "in training bra" longer than prepubescents, no titties
shred him, not kidding, this shit'll be cataclismic
there's no Juice, no recycling, Em this isn't the rap olympics
dipshit, I think you should come in a yellow package
Cause his boyfriends put nuts in M&M....their faggots
and I'm just rabid when rappin, my verse is hot it's true
so best beleive I'ma break you like the first shot in pool
(break cue)

[slimEMshady]

you smoking blunts I got me a bong/thank god for spell check you would have spelled those big words wrong
you being a rapper, farthest shit from sight/ liquid_fangs? what is this twilight
Kill you and make sure you go to hell/ eat your best verse like a fourth meal from taco bell
your trash raps I'm deleting them/ I'm putting my nuts on your M&M's/ and your eating them
he's mad cuz I got EM in my name/ if your verse is hot I'm here to ignite the flame
I get crazy on the mic call me bipolar/ bust in your girl's mouth and broke all her molars
now your girl, I stole her/ and she's holding my dick like a wii controller!!!
say goodbye to the hoes and tell em, you adore em/because when I'm done with you, you'll be banned from this forum

[Grizzly]

Is their a breakdown template thing I can use?

My vote is for Liquid_Fangs just need to find the breakdown so I can put who won on what.

[classthe_king]

Fangs in every category

[slimEMshady]

:O
quick question..
liquid_fangs said 0 things about me.. do you guys know what a battle is? LMFAOO
Oh I get it... you must all be friends..

[BILI]

Liquid wins this easily,its laughable how better he is.Do I need to break down my vote?

[slimEMshady]

this being my 1st battle I don't want to be a sore loser or whatever, but this guy was talking about three6mafia... lol if you guys are friends stop wasting my time bc this is bullshit

[classthe_king]

You are an idiot

[BILI]

this being my 1st battle I don't want to be a sore loser or whatever, but this guy was talking about three6mafia... lol if you guys are friends stop wasting my time bc this is bullshit

How can we be friends when he just joined the forum,I dont know nothing about him.His ryhmes are better,his punchlines are better 2,you dont even have a punchline or a fuckin multi.Plus I dont get your lines and shit.He has 10 lines and you have 8(which would mean that non of your lines rhymed)but if you count that your line ends with "/"(then you have 16 lines).So wtf,you wrote more/less lines then him and that means you lose,plus you flipped.So you stop with wasting my time with your bullshit,I just came in and gave my opinion

[EminemFreestyle]

liquid_fangs said 0 things about me..

Em this isn't the rap olympics

Anyways you're right fang was waaack I dont even know why they voted for him, I vote for Emshady

[slimEMshady]

Mine didn't make sense?
are you fucking retarded?
he's suppose to be battling me yet says 0 things in reference to me
he was busy talking about three6mafia

the / means its the next line.. have you ever seen somebody write a rap?
that would be the legitimate way to write one.. lol it lets you know when to start the next sentence which would count as one bar.. 8 lines was what I thought we were doing..

so FUCK your opinion and suck my cock

[classthe_king]

Mine didn't make sense?
are you fucking retarded?
he's suppose to be battling me yet says 0 things in reference to me
he was busy talking about three6mafia

the / means its the next line.. have you ever seen somebody write a rap?
that would be the legitimate way to write one.. lol it lets you know when to start the next sentence which would count as one bar.. 8 lines was what I thought we were doing..

so FUCK your opinion and suck my cock

Seriously, just leave

[Jaz]

Ahem..


slimEMshady, you are an idiot. Let me explain:

1) Mister 'I know everything about writing, don't question my structure I know what bars are' YOUR BARS AREN'T EVEN CLOSE TO EVEN.

I'm putting my nuts on your M&M's/
thank god for spell check you would have spelled those big words wrong
you being a rapper, farthest shit from sight/

That's 2 bars? Get the fuck out of here if you aren't going to use thought process in what you say.

2) Your rhymes aren't even good. No multis, no serous wordplay, no great punches.

'she's holding my dick like a wii controller'? That's some intense shit man. NOT.

3) You're a sore ass loser, a loser in general, and you lost. PEACE.