Edit: Airplanes Part 3 *New Version*

[classthe_king]

Major props to PK for helping me with this and mixing it

http://usershare.net/m1788vdpcavb

[j3andit]

you're other shit was WAAAY better than this.

not feelin this.

[MikeNUFC]

Rhyme-wise, it wasn't bad. I just thought your flow was all over the place and it kinda ruined the whole song.

Your other song was wayyy better, as the comment above says

[classthe_king]

Rhyme-wise, it wasn't bad. I just thought your flow was all over the place and it kinda ruined the whole song.

Your other song was wayyy better, as the comment above says

I know, I messed the flow up big time. Going back and listening to it, it sounds horrible.

[Tranquil]

to tell you the truth, i actully like it, yer the flow is a everywhere and shit, but i still like it, and the quality is just

[classthe_king]

Thanks man

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

vocals need to be lower man, your voice isnt mellowed into the beat.

but you got a strong delivery, voice is distinct.

i aint goin to question anything about lyrics or lyrical shit it just aint me anymore.

your flow isnt to bad man, if your vocals were lower i think it would sound alot smoother.

not bad man, first track i heard from you, so defiantly got potential man.

[Solace]

The entire flow of this was horrible, other than that I enjoyed it. I would really love this if you had mastered the flow. Verses were fucking great though, the written part.

[classthe_king]

Thanks everyone

And yeah I'm rerecording it, I've already done the first verse and it sounds much better. I'll do the second verse soon. Thanks for all the support

[TripleNineThree]

I thought the quality of your voice was good. You need to lower the vocals a lot tho so it matches the beat better. Your voice overpowers the beat way too much. I enjoyed your delivery tho, I didn't think your flow was THAT bad, but there is deffinately room for improvement. Every once ina while you got off beat but other than that the flow was good. I was really feeling this song, i'd LOVE it if it was mixed slightly better

Keep it up fam!!

7/10

Think you could return the feed?? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=90519

[classthe_king]

Thanks bro

[gutawafang]

Man. This is very good. Mixing can be better, but it's still good. Flow is pretty good. Lyrics quite good too, can be improved a lot. Maybe, change the concept a bit.

[classthe_king]

Man. This is very good. Mixing can be better, but it's still good. Flow is pretty good. Lyrics quite good too, can be improved a lot. Maybe, change the concept a bit.

Thanks man, I recorded a better version but I just never uploaded it.

[jba1me]

first time hearing your stuff thought it was dope. really like your voice. flow was choppy but other than that really dope

[classthe_king]

Thanks man