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I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » Jun 21st, '10, 00:09

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G9PcktqLfNw


Lyrics are in the video, lemme know what you think!!!

Drop a link and I'll Return the Feed ASAP
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby Solace » Jun 21st, '10, 00:33

Did you do the chorus?
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby classthe_king » Jun 21st, '10, 03:45

I can't watch videos on youtube right now
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby j3andit » Jun 21st, '10, 05:24

beat in, sounds epic.. hahaha

im assuming the hook is sampled, but it's dope.

you flowed this really well, it all went together smoothly, so props for that..
the lyrics were dope, and went together very well with the theme of the song
quality could be upped, but nothin much u could for that...

overall pretty dope man, I'll check for you again....and if you're ever down to collab hit me up on PM. :shifty: :b: :b:
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » Jun 21st, '10, 05:42

^^^ Thanks for the feed! I'll hit you up when I have an open verse for sure!!

If you can't watch it on youtube you can hear it at http://www.reverbnation.com/tripleninethree
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » Jun 21st, '10, 05:43

Solace wrote:Did you do the chorus?



Nah man, I wish, but chorus was sampled haha, I can't sing at all
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby youngfire420 » Jun 21st, '10, 09:07

Nice beat and hook ;)

Lyrics - On point throughout the whole song. Nice lyrics man.
Flow - LOVE the flow. You did good.
Other - Good song. Good quality man. Keep it up.

8/10
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby Mr. FTP » Jun 21st, '10, 09:08

I'm not gonna lie, your flow on this made me go :o
you are definitely one talented artist if you want we could collab soon! hit me up via PM bro.

Lyrics stayed on point throught the track, which is an auto +
Flow as i said was perfect and on point! props!

overall: 9/10
great track homie!
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » Jun 21st, '10, 09:21

Thanks for the feed guys! I'll hip you up sometime with a collab
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby Solace » Jun 21st, '10, 16:00

TripleNineThree wrote:
Solace wrote:Did you do the chorus?



Nah man, I wish, but chorus was sampled haha, I can't sing at all

Oh well, the verses which I know you did were pretty good too. You have a nice controlled flow, on track with the meaning and the sampled chorus fits perfect.
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby classthe_king » Jun 21st, '10, 16:25

This was dope man. Flow was great, lyrics were pretty good and so was your delivery. The chorus was great. I thought it if it was mixed a little better it would have been a great track. It just needs to be a little more clear
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Re: I'm Gone [Lyrics]

Postby TripleNineThree » Jun 22nd, '10, 06:07

Thanks for the feed everyone! Remember to drop a link so I can return the favor!!

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