Hip-Hop [Lyrics]

by **TripleNineThree** » Jun 25th, '10, 05:36

Listen/Download Link - http://www.reverbnation.com/tripleninethree

Or - http://www.zshare.net/audio/777553828f3c2239/

Lyrics -
Yeah, Let me ask you a question
Whats Hip-Hop if it has no message?

My track, are my way of confession
Through the speakers listen to my lection

You need a lesson a blessin a self reflection
Open up your word because we really need less sin

I take a look at Hip-Hop its depressin
Everythings the same from the money to the weapons

I keep steppin, rappers keep reppin
Sinnin to the fame and honestly it is wreckin

Everything that is around, killin good sound
I don't really know what to do right now

I let the bass pound, I'm in your face now
Getting Christ up on the track yo my sinnin is erased now

They say to slow my pace down, Imma speed it up
Bow my head n pray I'll let the spirit heat it up

Chorus
Put your hands up from side to side
Lets represent Christ, lets do it tonight
Lets change a few lives, we be showin our light
Gonna rep him on the mic lets do it up right
(X2)

Verse 2
Yeah.. So what you wanna call it?
All these dudes talkin about how they be ballin

They fallin, all in, got no one to call in
Now the devils haulin, hes gettin your soul

No sinnin in my flow I'm not doin this for the dough
I'll admit that I'm low, no Christ then no show

He is the artist homie I'm just dirt below
Hes the one thats goin hardest I'm the one thats goin slow

Yeah, but I try to keep up
I can't, I can't, so I need to reach up

Hes blessin me with lyrics so that I can reach ya
Through the speaka - do you understand

I'm gonna follow the son of man
As you walk through the fire just take his hand

This is Hip-Hop not comin with any band
I got Christ, preachin with a boom boom bam

Chorus
Put your hands up from side to side
Lets represent Christ, lets do it tonight
Lets change a few lives, we be showin our light
Gonna rep him on the mic lets do it up right
(X20

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by **GibbzyTrShady** » Jun 25th, '10, 10:40

Your voice is tight!!! lyrics are spot on too and the flow is crazy ill...is ure stuff mixed professionally ?? becuz if not someone has majour mixing talent!!! the beat is killer to and the sampled cuts in the hook are sick!!
this is hella tight and sound pretty mainstream for the type of song it is..!
over all ide give it 8/10 the other 2 would be gained just by hearin more of your songs!!!

by **TripleNineThree** » Jun 25th, '10, 18:57

Wow man thanks for the feed! And nah.. its not professionally mixed at all. All that I use is a 150 dollar USB mic and mix it all myself. I spend A LOT of time on the mixing so that is probably whats paying off for me haha

Thanks again for the feed man!! I'll be droppin a lot more songs here if you don't mind you should drop feed at my other song called "I'm Gone"

The link for that song is - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=90519

by **mcZu** » Jun 25th, '10, 21:42

I like it, not really lyrical, but it has a message. Delivery sounds good, flow was on beat and you got a good voice for rapping. Only thing I think you can improve on is the actual rapping as in your pengame.
Some words didn't even rhyme, lack of multies, lack of wordplay, etc.

But in terms of song making, I gotta say you did a good job. Keep it up!