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Postby Miss Dre » Feb 24th, '06, 21:37

I wrote this for my contemporary themes class
I made this poem up for a project tell me what u think: it's called man cookies.

Man cookies, man cookies
I love you so
Man cookies, man cookies
I love your soft dough
Man cookies, man cookies
with your delicate chocolatey chip
Man cookies, man cookies
it's time for you to get in my stomach.

Man cookies, man cookies
golden brown just right
Man cookies, man cookies
you won't make it to tonight
Man cookies, man cookies
cooked just right
Man cookies, man cookies
I think I'll take a bite.
Oh, I think you misunderstood me,
it's not man cookies, it's my cookies!

Whaddya think?
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Postby Ivy » Feb 24th, '06, 21:52

:shocked: Cookies :shifty: where'd they go :'( I thought there was cookies :angry: .....lol.. :p
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Postby MuNxMuN » Feb 24th, '06, 23:36

lol the last part was pretty funny. i read the first line and was like wtf is a man cookie? lol :sweating:
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Postby Mr. Cookie » Feb 24th, '06, 23:43

you're writin' bout' me..I'm cookie... :D

and nice poem...
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Postby Rae » Feb 25th, '06, 00:19

yeah that was pretty good! the last part was awesome! :D
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 25th, '06, 04:15

bobbie aka cokie :shifty:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Feb 25th, '06, 04:16

Angie wrote::swear: wtf!?!?!? :confusion: ur back!?!? did u bring ur friend?!?!? :shocked: :shocked2:


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Postby MuNxMuN » Feb 25th, '06, 04:25

yea i know i wasn't here when she was here but i read the topics sarah posted and they were quite intresting lol
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Postby Mr. Cookie » Feb 25th, '06, 11:25

I'm cookie :tounge2: who steals my name? burn in hell if someone steal my name... :D :D
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