The Slaughter

[classthe_king]

Recorded two verses cause I was bored

If anyone wants to hear the version Solace and XRay heard its right here

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYFxHuVYFkM

[Solace]

I'm not an audio head so I cant be much in depth but in this and even your rerecorded Airplanes you just have problems grasping a flow. And you need to work on breath control. 2nd verse is fire as stated before. Lyrically this is beast. Also your mixing is boring, try some dubs and overlays.

[classthe_king]

I'm not an audio head so I cant be much in depth but in this and even your rerecorded Airplanes you just have problems grasping a flow. And you need to work on breath control. 2nd verse is fire as stated before. Lyrically this is beast. Also your mixing is boring, try some dubs and overlays.

Thanks, I'm working on dubs and overlays but I can't get it good yet and it sounds horrible

[j3andit]

sup bro, I dunno what everyone else was talkin about but I really enjoyed this..

I like ya delivery, and a few of your lines had me like....eeeeeeee. hahaha. so props

but anyways, if u want some tips on overlays holla @ me, I've got over 200+ hours in the studio,

I may not be the best at recording cuz I'm still new like you are, but I know the concepts of how to give vocals depth. and punching in, overlays, and overdubs are your best bet, so lemme know if u want some tips.

overall 8.3/10

dope shit man

[gutawafang]

Man, this is fucking great. The beat is so gangsta. It fits your style man.

[classthe_king]

Thanks everyone. Be prepared for some more stuff with this

[Solace]

I wouldn't want these ace verses to go to waste so if you ever plan on re-recording when you're at the top of this shit...Audio Stage bout to have an uproar.

[BILI]

Damn homie,this was some dope shit,you spit fire on this audio shit,

[DƎRDYPK]

I love the final outcome
check my MSN status

[jba1me]

i liked the fans and alaskan cabin line. thought it was pretty funny. i liked the first verse alot more than the second.

[classthe_king]

Thanks guys

[Terry_M]

Second track I've heard by you, and I've officially become a fan. You have the perfect voice for that underground style of rap, and I love your gritty lyrics. Keep it the fuck up.

[classthe_king]

Second track I've heard by you, and I've officially become a fan. You have the perfect voice for that underground style of rap, and I love your gritty lyrics. Keep it the fuck up.

That's awesome man

[Jaz]

idk why but your intro sentence sounded weird to me, haha.. Can't put a finger on why.

The lyrics are solid. Your voice reminds me of someone, but I can't think of who. You should drop a hook in the middle there though!


Anyway, like I said solid lyrics, delivery is decent, flow is straight.. and quality is good.


And if you get a chance check out my new tracks Fantast Girl and SVP Eternal they should still be on the first page

[classthe_king]

idk why but your intro sentence sounded weird to me, haha.. Can't put a finger on why.

The lyrics are solid. Your voice reminds me of someone, but I can't think of who. You should drop a hook in the middle there though!


Anyway, like I said solid lyrics, delivery is decent, flow is straight.. and quality is good.


And if you get a chance check out my new tracks Fantast Girl and SVP Eternal they should still be on the first page

Thanks man, means alot. In a few days there should be a remix of this posted and you'll see a huge improvement in my 2 verses. Peep that