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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 14th, '10, 21:21

metaphors are pretty much a more complex version of similes.....or comparing something without using "like" or "As"

punchlines can be metaphors...but punchlines are suppose to be "funny".....least thats my view....
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 14th, '10, 22:56

Ƨteven© wrote:i was under the impression a punchline had to have a double meaning lol

:unsure:

^it can...example

"Cut your fuckin' head off and ask you where you headed off to
Get it, headed off to? Medic, this headache's awful"
^eminem

punchline...

a simpler one?

"i keep a long line of hose like firetrucks"
lloyd banks

simple yet gets the point across....
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 14th, '10, 23:20

Idk bout the first few but the last one was cool the way it flows lol
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 15th, '10, 03:00

None of those were very good.
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby Solace » Jul 15th, '10, 04:01

4. Spittin Flames like a volcano, You never know when i may blow.

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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby gutawafang » Jul 15th, '10, 04:08

Punchline is funny.
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Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jul 15th, '10, 10:21

Punchlines should be shocking and funny.
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 15th, '10, 11:12

I think Punches are usually short sentences and include the most material of the subject and yeah usually funny but close to reality

but Metaphors are exaggerated form of sth

as an examples :


Diabolic, Shimbolic, Face the infernal ,Evil demon, And I can make you eternal -by: Tech -Punchline

Nobody to witness ,I call it habit,You call it a verbal sickness,Damagin with a quickness-By :Tech - Metaphor

Both are very similar but a lil different
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby gutawafang » Jul 15th, '10, 11:15

Drama Setter wrote:I think Punches are usually short sentences and include the most material of the subject and yeah usually funny but close to reality

but Metaphors are exaggerated form of sth

as an examples :


Diabolic, Shimbolic, Face the infernal ,Evil demon, And I can make you eternal -Tech -Punchline

Nobody to witness ,I call it habit,You call it a verbal sickness,Damagin with a quickness - Metaphor

Both are very similar but a lil different

yeah, pretty good example I think.

I think punchline is more visual than metaphor, in conclusion.
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Re: Hey CW, AUDIO, And knowledgeable rap fans. HELP NEEDED.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 15th, '10, 17:16

A metaphor can be a punchline...a metaphor isn't a rap term, it's an english term. Comparing two things without using like or as. A punchline is just a line that makes you look good or the other rapper look bad, sometimes you can use a metaphor to do that.

My rhymes are hotter then fire <---metaphor and punchline
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