JBM - Illuminati

[JBM]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K94XPetzw4w

finished it up, check it out.

[Terry_M]

The beat is stunning. The concept is really good, the lyrics are quite good too, flow needs to be tightened up a bit though.

[JBM]

thanks for the feed and listening.

[Xray]

Crazy beat.

Mixing: Was mixed nice except the vocals were low as shit. Turn them up next time. I could barely understand what was being said. The best way to do this right is, while mixing turn the volume of the track all the way up. And then all the way down. This way the you can hear how your track will sound when turned up, and when turned down. It helps, well it helps me anyways...

Spitting: One thing that stood out to me was your delivery, I like it. Flow needed some work, but that's mostly the lyrics fault. You had some space to add a few more words in those rhymes, and it certainly would of made your flow smother. If you perfect the lyrics, it will be easy to record. Anyways I liked the concept, beat and delivery. That sample is crazy.

[Weather Man]

Really fucking sick man. Keep doing your thing. shit is bangin'

[JBM]

Thx for the feed.

[heihei635241]

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[sharoyceantwan]

You were on point w/ this one, JBM. The beat was stunning on its own, but the flow complemented it very well. You did really good on this track. The flow is so priceless that its not in my budget, sir. I'd love to collab sometime.

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