Jay-19 - Feel Me

[Jay-19]

Yeehaaw!
Back with a cocky track, I kinda get the feelin' that it's like a "Paint It All Black Pt. 2".
But yeah, high when I wrote it, high when I recorded it, high when I mixed it, so no surprise the result is dope!

Lyrics...

it's motherfucking time for Jay to just shine
and if time is the green, I'm savin' us time
afraid if this time, I find my rhymes light
then I fight for the heavyweight belt next night
I'm not a ghost don't be fooled by my skin
put him on the mic, get the truth out of him
in the booth I'm a king, crown that's enormous
bound to perform as I ride through the storm
just to find out the force is as nice as I thought
surprise to you dawg, I'm here to stay
and I don't fear to say, what the fuck I wanna do
knock ya ass out, I can knock another too
fuckin' up a few while I'm up here in the booth
me motherfucker, can rock your fuckin' troops
and always act cool if you suckin' up ya through
my verse just ended, lucky there for you

hook
here we go, ridin' slow
feel me flow, rhyme is dope
feel my joy, and feel my pain
and hear my voice and fear my brain

yo wuzzup motherfucker this is Crystal Lake
and I'm the upgraded Jason with the scissors, blades
think I'm motherfuckin' drownin' cuz this pissy game
fuck this today! let's see your pistol play!
do your fuckin' best, give it all that you got
straight from the dome, spit it all on the spot
fuck the game man, get it off with Hip Hop
fuck your name was? f'get it man I forgot
you can be tight, give a damn if you hot
planted some pot in my hand cuz I rot
dick is so big that I stand on my cock
when it goes down man, will you man up or not?
stand the fuck up, I'mma bring you down
take a close look at everything around
might just be the last sight you'll ever get to see
and God is to you what the Devil is to me

hook

rollin' solo like Frodo did a couple minutes
in the movies about the ring
admit it I'm the shit, and when I'm spittin'
I got your homie's about to sing
everything I say or everything do
I do or say it so I can win
and since I am the devil it's impossible
to say that Jay is without a sin
x2

hook

Check it out!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1stmGaE7FE
http://www.speedyshare.com/files/240898 ... eel_Me.mp3

[DƎRDYPK]

whoaaaaa

jayyyy
this is hot son
i'm only into the 2nd verse & shit this is fire
downloaded

peace & love my dude

[Jay-19]

Thanks for the kind words Derdy!

[dR3]

That's pretty good, I like it. The beat is good, the lyrics are nice, and your pronunciation is really good considering you're Swedish.

Only thing I don't like is the hook, but that's just me. Keep it up bro.

[Jay-19]

Thanks for the feed dr3!
Hooks ain't what I'm best at..

[gutawafang]

It's just...

crazy.

The hook would be better if you don't use the word "and" at all. It would sound stronger. Other than that, thumbs up.

[B.A.D.]

whats with the laughs at the begining hahahaha

damn! nice ass beat

nothing much to feed cuz you did good on all aspects here, except maybe for this type of track you should definitively step up the vocab game, its good, but gotta be better if you want that cocky aspect to work at its 100%. the hook was interesting, very diferent of what I would've done for this beat.

lyrics great, flow great.

nice track man

the bridge, started up really good, but I gotta teach you how to do that properly, youre missing a bunch of stuff that will help you polish those melodizing bridges. holla

[Jay-19]

Thanks guta and Ax-D!
About the laughs, I don't really know why I kept them, but my friends where here while I was recording, and I laughed about something, and they thought I should keep the laugh so..

I''ll holla at you about that Ax bridge thing!

[Terry_M]

Hot shit man, hot shit. You're fucking dope.

[Weather Man]

Fucking sick, this was nice.

[Jay-19]

Thanks Terry and Captain! Glad you liked it!

[Tornado]

Nice ass beat you got. Where do you find beats man?

More sickness. Didn't like the hook but the verses more than made up for that. Nothing else to say exceept nice ass job

[Jay-19]

Nice ass beat you got. Where do you find beats man?

More sickness. Didn't like the hook but the verses more than made up for that. Nothing else to say exceept nice ass job

I find like 95% of the beats I use on www.shadowville.com
Check it out, some dope fuckin' beats right there.

Thanks for checkin' it bro.