JBM - Why

[JBM]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DbAs7Ts7Xwg

check it out. feed if u want. ty.

[Solace]

I liked your delivery, you sounded extremely comfortable. Your lyrics are okay, but you usually end up writing too many words in a line and having to rush the words to fit the bar (hence your flow is bad). I love Friends, so awesome video. Great choice for a beat. I would LOVE a version of this if your flow was on lock though. It wasn't bad bro, keep at it. I remember your first upload here sucked balls lmfao, you improved a lot. Just work on that flow.

[JBM]

Thanks man. As long as im getting better ill keep at it.

[JBM]

up.

[Terry_M]

I agree with Solace. Overall it was a solid track, but you were rushing words into your flow a lot. Keep working on smoothing that out.

[sharoyceantwan]

Its funny how you managed to dissect the average feelings of a male during in the relationship. I felt that you were calling all the fellas out with this one. You got some real heartfelt and deep lyrics in this one. The beat wasnt as nearly satisfying as your flow, sir
It would've been better acapella

[Weather Man]

This was a good one, reminds me of one of those old love songs back in the day, this shit was tight man keep it up