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Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby youngfire420 » Sep 26th, '10, 03:29

New shit, hope y'all are feeling this. Lemme know me know what you think.


I wipe, the fire from my mouth
Like I was a dragon just tryna guard the princess' house
Anybody come up on it, well they better just bounce
Or imma have to spit these lines to show 'em what I'm bout
Make 'em pout, make 'em cry, make 'em wish that they didn't try
I'm the guy, I'm so fly, and my rythm never dies
Oh why? That questions easily answered
I get the crowds shakin' like a dancer, I'm handsome
Rhymes are sick, they in the same group as cancer
Never go away, they are driven like a Lancer
Hold these beat for ransom, never ever give 'em up
But their spirits still lifted up like hemi truck
Many rappers stuck in the mainstream ways
But ever since the day I started I remain the same
And thats the way Ill stay, till I rest in peace
And if you tryna change that you better go to sleep

Hardly ever go to sleep since I started rappin'
But sometimes during the day I just find myself nappin'
But when I catch that my first reaction
Is to, get up in the booth with every bit of passion
That I have, but sometimes it ain't enough
And sometimes I get carried away with the wrong stuff
This ain't a bluff, I just tell it how it is
But the answers don't always match to the questions on the quiz
And yeah I been through some crazy shit, made it through the hardest nights
Then the first thing that comes to mind, is just start to write
And some of the dumbest things I left, are my smartest rights
But still music is my love so I guess that means my heart is right
Never tryna step back, always tryna take the lead
But sometimes I end up in a problem that is just so deep
But the book on the cover ain't how it seems
And if you don't understand well you better go to sleep

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Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 26th, '10, 04:22

is that you in the chorus?

nice,i like ur delivery it gives me chills ;p and the flow is good dude...I really liked this,i love the first verse better...hmm i think the vocals's volume of verse 2 are a bit low for the beat i guess :y:
but i really like this ,cool song ;)
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Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby youngfire420 » Sep 28th, '10, 06:50

le tunisien wrote:is that you in the chorus?

nice,i like ur delivery it gives me chills ;p and the flow is good dude...I really liked this,i love the first verse better...hmm i think the vocals's volume of verse 2 are a bit low for the beat i guess :y:
but i really like this ,cool song ;)

Nah, its Lupe Fiasco on the chorus. And thanks! Glad you liked it! :y:
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Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 28th, '10, 15:05

I like the flow a lot, but I really suggest you to raise the volume on your voice man.
Other than that, I'm diggin' this man. :y:
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Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby Tha Q » Sep 28th, '10, 15:40

Love the beat...and the cadence on here...very epic sounding to me


levels seem low all around though...I guess youtube's compression effects quality

Otherwise, this was a slick joint man




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Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby youngfire420 » Sep 29th, '10, 08:02

Jay-19 wrote:I like the flow a lot, but I really suggest you to raise the volume on your voice man.
Other than that, I'm diggin' this man. :y:
Thanks man! I have actually really been getting lots of feedback about my vocals being low. But I think its just the beat 'over powers' it. But I will end up raising the vocals if I put this on a future projects! Thanks for checking it out and leaving feedback! :b:

Tha Q wrote:Love the beat...and the cadence on here...very epic sounding to me


levels seem low all around though...I guess youtube's compression effects quality

Otherwise, this was a slick joint man




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Thanks bro! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :b:
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Re: Noble - Go To Sleep

Postby Tranquil » Sep 30th, '10, 06:38

First off, the beat is just dope :worship:your beat choice is dope! haha. The flow, the lyrics there all there, the only thing is, is that your vocals need to be raised a bit ;) other then that this track is Fire!!
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