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Postby Inzanity » Mar 11th, '06, 22:35

(Verse 1)
Lets go back to the days of Adam and Eve,
if they would've only known Satan had em' decieved
God said don't eat da apples on that apple tree
but Satan came as a serpent, and said go on Eve eat the apple
but it wasn't worth it , and Eve didn't have to
but she listened to the the serpent, and committed the first sin,
and thats y today the people are hurtin'
and God made it clear that in the last days the evil will worsen
crime on da streets, lies and deciete
it reminds me of the days of Noah, every1 was sinning
and God said Noah tell my people it's gonna rain but they didn't listen
so God said Noah build an Ark, and bring ur family and one of each creature
and Noah listend cause' he knew he was the student and God's the teacher

(Course)
so spread ur wings and fly like the eagle
don't let Satan lie and decieve u
u gotta hide from the evil
so spread ur wings and fly like the eagle

(Verse 2)
the people laughed at Noah, like it was a joke
"Don't build the Ark ur wastin' ur time so just don't"
"we're in the middle of the desert, it ain't gonna rain Noah"
"yes it is and when it does rememer I told ya"
so Noah kept buildin' the Ark and survived the flood,
and God made a new world alive with love,
and God said Noah I'll never again end the world with water
and he made that promise as Noah's heavenly father
and he blessed Noah's generation
but here we are back in the same situation
but God warned us about this in the book of Revelation
every1's sinning, when God tells us to do something we don't listen

(Course)
so spread ur wings and fly like the eagle
don't let Satan lie and decieve u
u gotta hide from the evil
so spread ur wings and fly like the eagle


(Verse 3)
evil is wat men desire, and this time the world will end in fire
God said man will destroy themselves, it'll end in war,
we'll destroy are selves with bombs for sure
Satan has us decieved, just like Adam and Eve
Jesus is soon to come, and if ur livin' in sin ur doomed and done
Satan decieves many but he appears as an angle of light
so if u ain't saved and ain't livin' right
u ain't goin' with the son of man, and I hope u understand
Jesus is comin' like a thief in the night, so if u don't believe in the light
u'll spend eternity in darkness, so remember Satan is cold and heartless
as many as except Jesus, they are the children of God
as many as reject Jesus, they are the villians of God
all u have to do is pray ta God, and remember Jesus paid the cost
he came ta save the lost, when he got nailed to the cross

(Course)
so spread ur wings and fly like the eagle
don't let Satan lie and decieve u
u gotta hide from the evil
so spread ur wings and fly like the eagle
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 11th, '06, 22:45

great idea for a song
very nicely written
keep up the great work
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Postby DOPE » Mar 12th, '06, 07:46

great shit Empty!

specially i like them last two lines of your last verse!!
"It's amazing that the amount of news that happens in the world every day always just exactly fits the newspaper."

My basic disk will make you take a razor to your wrist
Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches


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Postby DarkMan » Mar 12th, '06, 08:02

i think for anyone to write a song who isnt a music artist is good..


great work :thumbsup:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Mar 12th, '06, 08:28

wow tht wuz :coolthumb: keep up tha good work :flowers:
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Postby Inzanity » Mar 13th, '06, 05:12

thanx for the replys uppin' 4 more feed
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