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Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

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Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 10th, '10, 16:01

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First Single from the next album "DIE A KING"
Produced by Me
Listen on:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sOMoaHMVnOQ
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http://www.myspace.com/bigaxd

I also posted the album cover and tracklist on the emcee lounge.
here's a link: viewtopic.php?f=54&t=99719

Lyrics:
(Verse 1)
I'm in a no cross zone, But I know you wanna cross it
waiting for the ozone to open up a crust for a comet to crush into the ocean
you spoke of your devotion to kill that true emotion
but I'm loyal to the sound, not the money, not this potion
so the ozone its stronger than ever, no corruption,
no way to penetrate it, no second hand phillosophical babbles
that turn your mind out into a fucking locomotion
when you feel that power's off, feels like playing scrabble,
cuz when the bubble's out the cloud, I'll make the rain climb
with this power on my mind, settle down when I arrive
Let me remember my:
litte hope that you missed me... I hope u wanna kiss me
I hope you'll be my princesss.
I enjoy my reminisce in this
life that miss its misses Big Ax-D... I'll aim u
I cure you immature little girl, before I friend u

(Hook)
Everynight, and everytime
you speak of mine, I'm on your mind
I'll be your eyes, you'll be my life
and I'll be there... (I'll be there)
no peace of mind, who stole your life?
I'll cloud your mind, you'll cry tonight
we'll sometime's fight, Its only right
but I'll be there... (I'll be there)

(Bridge)
Just hear me out, Just hear me out
you'll hear me out, will hear me out
come hear me now, you'll hear me out
when I be there.... (hear me)
Just hear me out, Just hear me out
you'll hear me out, will hear me out
come hear me now, you'll hear me out
when I be there.... (hear me now)

(verse 2)
_Love_ is the way to live, Love is the way to deal in
the broken strings of the violins whichs sound's seems to
be deep inside our dreams, I'm just tryna let u know
what I feel
in a few words, I miss ya, I needs ya to still.... love me back
please wouldn't you.... be friends with my other wife too
and my other life should stay on the same space with you,
while I deal with it
its just another prayer, something on another layer
someone watch me from above and help me save the city, mayor
its all just so infair, and makes me tear my fucking hair
but I know when both of you are close, I can live in the air
its a manage et trois, love, music and life
so girl I need you be patient when this bitch puts up a fight
if you dont like it?... then walk away from me
cuz I'm the one and only. (fuck yeah)

(Hook) x2
Everynight, and everytime
you speak of mine, I'm on your mind
I'll be your eyes, you'll be my life
and I'll be there... (I'll be there)
no peace of mind, who stole your life?
I'll cloud your mind, you'll cry tonight
we'll sometime's fight, Its only right
but I'll be there... (I'll be there)

(Bridge) x2
Just hear me out, Just hear me out
you'll hear me out, will hear me out
come hear me now, you'll hear me out
when I be there.... (hear me)
Just hear me out, Just hear me out
you'll hear me out, will hear me out
come hear me now, you'll hear me out
when I be there.... (hear me now)
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 10th, '10, 16:02

shit. forgot the feedback link
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99640
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 11th, '10, 03:18

***** wrote:pretty sick, good flow. at some parts your flow got meh but you picked it back up quick


thanks man, I appreciate you listening to it :worship:

classthe_king wrote:The vocals seemed really weak to me for some reason. They just seemed to get overshadowed by the beat. Besides that it was good though. I really liked the chorus and you flowed over it for the most part. I'll be peepin the album.

Edit: Shit, this was suppossed to go on Hear Me Now


I'll just reply here haha.
Thanks a lot for listening I appreciate your comments. and youre right. fuck, I listened to it again and its true the vocals should be a bit louder. I'll have it fixed on the album when I make the final mastering :y:

thanks a lot again for listening

and thanks to all the other people that listened, although I do would appreciate feedback. :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 11th, '10, 04:45

the beat was pretty sick. is this long intro also gonna be on the album? it works for the video, but i'm not so sure as a song it'd work. maybe put some samples in it.

ok the technical stuff. i liked the hook. it was quite catchy for such a serious song. the emotion was there as always. nothing to change there. lyrics were decent. nice content here, i could dig it. the flow in certain spots was kind of shakey, but overall not bad. the quality didn't seem up to your usual standard but that might be just youtube.... :n:

overall not a bad song. i finished that one track, sorry i haven't uploaded it yet
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Emadyville » Oct 11th, '10, 05:07

First off, I loved how the beat just gradually picked up with different instruments, that was really cool. Your frist verse was good, flow was there, a few parts where it seemed rushed, but it got right back on point so it really didnt take anything away from it. The delivery was solid, only thing was some overlays seemed too loud or a little off, maybe it was just me tho cause Im not listening with headphones.

Anyway, hook was good, I liked how you sounded on that, and the bridge was dope as hell, really enjoyed that a lot.

Second verse was cool in the transition you did half way through, that pause was nice, and the speeding up was great.

Overall man this was really a cool song, it was different, i liked what you did content wise, which all came together with the hook and bridge.

Great job man :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Xray » Oct 11th, '10, 07:10

Uh... Not my cup of tea. The beat was average, didn't like it much. The overall song just didn't cut it for me, felt way too weird listening to something this happy..
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 11th, '10, 07:31

Xray wrote:Uh... Not my cup of tea. The beat was average, didn't like it much. The overall song just didn't cut it for me, felt way too weird listening to something this happy..

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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 11th, '10, 07:38

chambers wrote:.


thanks for listening man, and I do appreciate the great feedback :worship: . its true youtube fucked a bit with the feedback. but the quality when on the cd will be a complete diferent thing, thanks for listening and commenting

Emadyville wrote:.


thanks, I appreciate every word, thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you liked it man, thanks for listening and taking the time to feedback in big & comment.

Xray wrote:.

I agree its not your cup of tea lol. however I dont think the beat is average at all, but hey, diferent taste. anyway Thanks a lot for listening to it, and taking the time to comment, I appreciate that. and dont worry, the rest of the album is not happy sounding. haha :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby gutawafang » Oct 11th, '10, 08:22

its just another prayer, something on another layer
someone watch me from above and help me save the city, mayor
its all just so infair, and makes me tear my fucking hair
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Robbie G » Oct 11th, '10, 23:05

It wasn't really my cup of tea either.

I thought the beat definitely overpowered the lyrics. The beat actually started to get a little annoying after awhile too...hopefully if your re-master it for the album that will be better. I did like the chorus though, it saved the song for me.

Looking forward to the album.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Phantom » Oct 12th, '10, 01:13

not bad man, although i feel the beat sounds kind of amateurish its really not a bad sound. lyrics were very good and you had a nice flow. good to hear you keep growing.

also id like to add that i really how original you are, i cant say ive heard other people with a similar sound. youve given birth a style all your own, and i definitely respect that man
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 12th, '10, 04:25

gutawafang wrote: :

:worship: back at cha! :worship:

Robbie G wrote:.


thanks for listening and taking the time to comment. I appreciate that a lot :worship: :worship: Diferent tastes for everybody so I respect that. but I am thankfull for the comment and listen. :y:

Phantom wrote:.


I appreciate those words, hahaha *gets blushed*... na, for real. thanks man, feels really good to hear someone of your calliber say that. I appreciate you listening to the song :worship: :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 12th, '10, 06:14

I didn't enjoy the lyrics because of the lack of multies, rhymes and delivery. the beat and movie is awesome and i think it your vocab on this song needs to step up to become a meaningful song to catch my ears.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 12th, '10, 07:06

Ka0t1c wrote:I didn't enjoy the lyrics because of the lack of multies, rhymes and delivery. the beat and movie is awesome and i think it your vocab on this song needs to step up to become a meaningful song to catch my ears.


thanks for listening and for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it. this being the single I didnt wanted to get in 2 deep with the lyrical. beacuse most of the people that listen to this song are not Native English speakers so I have to keep it chilly for them. but If listen to some other song you will see no doubts on the lyrical way. Although I'm not as good as other people here lyric wise.

again thanks for listening and commenting, its well appreciated :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Hear Me Now [first single]

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 12th, '10, 15:12

You are truly one great Artist bro! Such a dope, inspirational track. I love the subject matter on it, it's right up my alley of this shit I've been thinking about recently. The hook is AMAZING dude, I see what you were going for. The lyrics on this were great as usual, but that's not really a surprise. The flow is what really shined on this, especially towards the end of the second verse, I don't think I've ever heard you spit a flow like that before and I must say you did a good job.

I'm digging the new artwork aswell man! Your last album was great so I can't wait for this one!
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