New Verse
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Re: New Verse
by Devil'sAdvocate » Oct 15th, '10, 17:32
good verse
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: New Verse
by Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '10, 21:52
I can spit double time 
I liked it man. That dot dot dollar sign line in the beginning was one of my favorites. I love the emotion in it ya know. Its nice to see writers who normally do more horrorcore/punchline stuff go to the basics of writing a more poetic style/ It's always good to see the real side of people. Great man for real. Keep that head up homie
I liked it man. That dot dot dollar sign line in the beginning was one of my favorites. I love the emotion in it ya know. Its nice to see writers who normally do more horrorcore/punchline stuff go to the basics of writing a more poetic style/ It's always good to see the real side of people. Great man for real. Keep that head up homie
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: New Verse
by DƎRDYPK » Oct 15th, '10, 22:21
pretty cool rhymes you got there
it'd sound sexy with your accent
keep the flows coming
it'd sound sexy with your accent
keep the flows coming
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Re: New Verse
by MakaveliTheDon » Oct 16th, '10, 04:15
This is so beautiful. I also liked that you swagger jacked my fast flows 
...lol jk
It's good you're going for a double time flow, I would love to hear it recorded. Fast flow + emotional = great most of the time.
Structure was kinda weird but I assume their part of the flow.
Keep at it Lil Steve
...lol jkIt's good you're going for a double time flow, I would love to hear it recorded. Fast flow + emotional = great most of the time.
Structure was kinda weird but I assume their part of the flow.
Keep at it Lil Steve
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