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V-Dogz Newest Shit!!!!!! - POSTED THE 20th CHECK DIS OUT!

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 20th, '05, 22:13

I'm EQUIPPED WITH STEEL to send clips to make sure that this BITCH WILL SQUEEL" and you cant tell no one i'm doin this cus I'll nails yo mouth down so your LIPS ARE SEALED,
These DUDES NEED SAVIORS" when I BRUISE THESE FAKERS" I'll put you in the hospital and have you gettin Stapled like LOOSE LEAF PAPER,
Youre DIRTY AND STUFF" I'll leave your sight BLURRY AND SCUFFED" wanna be in my crew so bad but youre not WORTHY ENUFF,
No HELPS BEING FOR UR health cus I'm a STEALTH REINFORCER" I'll bring a camera while i'm beatin yo ass just so you could get a image of urSELF BEING TOTURED,
HARSH WAYS HOT FLAMES_SHARP BLADES_CHOP FRAMES" TOSS GAYS GOT PLANS SHOTS GRAZE POPPIN,
TECHS SPLIT JOINTS IN TWO" I'm on top of the world with great sight and ur like"I wish i can see from THAT KID'S POINT OF VIEW" stupid bitch is DESPERATE TO JOIN MY CREW,
My VIRAL RHYMES DELETE" and my VITAL LINES INCREASE" I just met you and ur already IDOLIZIN ME

ITS IGHT BUT RATE IT PLZ!
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 20th, '05, 22:15

FUCKKKKKKK I 4GOT THE 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:twisted: :twisted: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: well rate it 1-9 ight? thanks
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Postby Darjan333 » Aug 20th, '05, 22:32

ok,man it is good,i ll give you 10,
but still-you are not on Em s level but keep doing that!
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Wow

Postby Vettori » Aug 20th, '05, 22:41

AGAIN i am surprised
That's the shit we need to here more of,
I wont say it's the best, But it sure as fuck doesnt suck lolz,
It made me smile, so hey, Nice work bro :o

I gave a 9 :D
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Yo

Postby Vettori » Aug 20th, '05, 22:43

I'm working on a song write now, so when im done it ill Email it to ya aight vdog, My friends sendin one of his to you in like a couple minutes, so I just hope ya like it :D

"Faith"
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Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 00:56

I gave ya 7 dawg, ur the best i`ve seen on this site =D> except for me. :D Ambitious like me rhymin multiple words n shit, huge props man, keep it up. Wanna battle :?:
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 15:26

dis shit was dope, dont hate hahaha :D :) :D :( :) :( :o :lol: :cry: :wink: :arrow: :idea: :roll: :oops: 8) :? :P :twisted: :?: :!: :evil: :x :shock: :D :D :D :) :o :( :) :D :)
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