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I'm Sorry (one-shot)

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I'm Sorry (one-shot)

Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 19th, '06, 23:36

i wrote this back in october for an english assignment tell me what you think :happy:

Rhia Mason, sixteen years old, was sitting in front of her sister
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Postby Mr. Cookie » Mar 19th, '06, 23:44

the story made me sad...poor little Rene...
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Postby Inzanity » Mar 20th, '06, 00:07

wow that was a really good story it mad me really sad :'(
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Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 20th, '06, 00:30

thanks :happy: i tried to make it more sad but i couldn't think of anything :sweating:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 20th, '06, 00:37

very good story. did you get a good grade?
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Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 20th, '06, 00:50

thanks and yup i got 50/50 :happy:
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