IntroFirst thing i notice is this is real atmospheric, works well
Although i thought the sound of pouring sounded artificial and stood out a bit
Beat is perfect as an intro
Your verse is great, pretty good content for an intro
Snow's flow is fuckin majesticccc haha
Other guy sounds pretty good as well, i can't really fault this
Nice abrupt ending, leads into the next song nice
Keep It Rollinglol never erectless, is erectless a word
I love the slight accent that sometimes creeps into Snow's voice on the hook, he does it well
I can't really fault it, it's hard to understand you guys accents (especially Snow cause he flows so quick sometimes) but your flows and presence are perfectly good
BBCI love this one, the beat's really chilled out
I love the concept for this one as well, i actually relate to this lol
I can understand most of Snow's verse on this, and he killed it i have to say
Flow is smooth as fuck, loved the lil break in the verse at like 0:44
The hook is nice too, works well
Can't complain about your verse either Bar
I'm really loving the content of this song lol, seriously
Your flow's pretty much perfect on this shit too
Favourite song so far easily, it's kinda humorous but it's got content too
Very easy to listen to
Fag Break SkitAgain i love how atmospheric the skits are, gives a real authentic feel to the tape
Eenie MeenieLoving the beat!
I kinda feel the beat sorta drowns out Snow a bit, maybe thats just me, and unfortunately i honestly can barely tell what he says lmao. Suppose that's just the language barrier.
The hook's pretty nice, i like the twist on it
Your verse sounds way higher, which is the first time i've seen this happen on this tape you guys been pretty in sync before
Nice verse from you Bar
This track coulda been better for me if i could understand it clearer i think
But that's just me, Scotland's your audience so obviously
DreamingAnother dope beat
Liking the
Loving the lyrics from you Bar here, your flow on point as always
Could understand a bit more of Snow this time lol
DestinyThe voice sample works great
I do feel the song is pretty similiar to the previous one, could have spaced that out a bit better maybe
This concept is obviously right up my alley
Can't fault your verses, great storytelling on your shit here
Snow's hook i'm feeling too, especially the "never know what i wanted to be"
Unfortunately Snow's goes over my head again mostly lol, but from the bits i caught i know he stayed to the concept
Pretty good track
Believe In MeYou know i like your lyrics on this verse, considering i posted some of the shits on my Facebook that time
Your verse was pretty sick again, i cant fault it honestly
The hook feels kinda empty though, coulda done something with that
Second guy's verse is fuckin good too, especially his alliteration with the S's early on
His delivery is way clearer i can understand pretty much all of it lol
Again, Snow's flow is solid just hard to understand him lmao
Last guy, probably the weakest out of the four, his flow had a couple gaps in it
The concept seems kinda standard, at times it sounds like it's getting more specific with dissing people who chat shit about you and that, but equally sometimes it just sounds like the standard "you won't stop me" song lol
Either way, still pretty decent
ShadowsObviously the beat's sick, Mart lol
Got to repeat what i said about Snow in the last couple songs i'm afraid lol
From what i can tell your voice kinda differs in content to Snow's lol, yours is all romantic n shit and his seemed to be more about just rap in general
I may be missing shit obviously though cause of the language
As for the girl, i'm assuming she's someone you know
Not a fan of girls who sing in American accents and make their voice waver lots because they think that's what you need to do to be a singer. She did alright but nout special imo.
I think this song dragged on longer than it needed to. The girl's "bridge" wasn't really needed lol, and as for the last guy he just sounds bored as fuck so it's not the best end to the song really.
Walk Through The StreetsThis beat sounds like some shit off an advert or something lol
It's good though
Again i'm sorry but Snow combined with his fast flow i can hardly understand half of what he said
I aint insulting him, i can tell he's good just from listenin to the flow n shit, i'm just mentioning it
Nice lil hook works well
Your verse was pretty good, bit basic at times but overall not too bad
This is weird cause i expected different from the title, this is more like an uplifting, happy song even though we're only halfway through lol
Might have fit better near the end or somethin i dunno
Decent track
All The Right MovesSnow demonstrating his great flow again, very unique, really can't fault it
The hook's dope, might have been cool if you guys coulda added a bit to it but it still works
Bar you sound like you in a cave a bit lmao, bit quieter
Shouting out TR lol, i'm not sure if that's a good idea?
I looove the lyrics in your verse here though
Your flow was great for most part, i think the bit where you said "obviously" sounded a bit rushed though
Not sure why you added that lil reversed repeat of the end of your verse at the end, but cool little touch i guess
Battle to RecognitionI know i've heard this beat somewhere before lol
Solid verse from you, real good to listen to, i think this is the kind of track this tape is best suited for imo
Haha Mr Sheen, nice
I liked that
I think Nity's verse sounded a bit too loud? But his verse was fuckin sick, flow is nicee and his delivery is real good to listen to
Although he did kinda just trail off a bit into the chorus there lol
But still no big deal
Snow's flow = FUCK! He kills it, at least i can understand his shit this time
He
kills this song, sorry he beat you both on this
One of my favourites so far
Royal Highness (learn to spell bitch)I assume this is another girl you know
Ugh what is it with the fuckin American shit lol, seriously if she sung in a Scottish accent it would suit the tape's feel so much better
Okay why the fuck you sound so low Bar lol
Also did you just say ass? Ooh dear
Your verse is decent but its so low that kinda distracts me
"You can be royalty, just don't start annoying me", liked that
The concept is pretty nice though
Imo the original hook was way better than this lol
Snow also low i see
I liked the little modification you did there with the you can have whatever you want
You guys verses are decent just its so low it fuckin distracts me lol
Third verse is alright, not as good as you two
Flow is a bit gappy, but not too bad
Although the slight Jamaican accent bits i hope are his actual accent and not just trying to conform
This song was meh for me lol
Seriously why was it all so low lmao, that really detracted from it for me
Party MammalsBeat sounds interesting, if a bit annoyingly hectic
Sounds great when it kicks in though
Your verse was alright i can't really complain about it technically
The concept just sorta bores me so i zoned out a bit
The hook seems a bit lazy to me
You guys flows ride the beat really well though
Decent song but it aint my kind of shit obviously
Come Back With ItBeat is really epic
Your verse i like the lyrics a lot
I know the concept is mostly just bragging but it actually works well
The hook i like too
Snow's lyrics weren't quite as inventive as yours imo on here but the flow was still sick
A nice little brag track, although i think it could have appeared sooner lol
For YouI aint gonna comment on this shit cause this subject just makes me gag so let's just move on
ReflectionsI think i've heard this before
Love the start of Snow's verse, especially how it mirrors the start of his first verse on the tape back on the intro
Nice foreshadowing on the next track there too
Loving his lyrics on this song, but obviously i'm bound to these concepts are more my shit lol
Loving his flow though, perfectly smooth
Hook is DOPE! The lyrics are fuckin great on that
Loving your verse on this too, especially the Hell line
Both of you killed this
Another of my faves
Big Boys Don't CryNice beat
Dope flow
Your delivery sounds the most emotional on here from the whole tape, i like that
Got to love the lyrics here, great shit, really deep
Hook is fuckin nice too
Damn maybe i'm just a sucker for more emotional tracks but shit i don't care lol
Snow's verse again unfortunately i missed a fair amount of it due to his accent n shit
Like how he did the hook seperately too, that was a good idea
Fade AwayDopeee beat
I'm not sure if the hook is just part of the beat or someone you know did it, but whoever sang the hook did a good job
Snow's flow is aptly slowed down, i think that works well for this track, fits the beat well
Why is this guy rapping about Snow's nan though lol, seems kinda strange, shouldn't he be talking about his own take on the shit? I dunno
His singing aint bad either, works nice on the track
Snow shines on this track, this is like the first track he's had mostly to himself and where i can actually understand most of what he says, plus it shows a deeper side to his shit so it's good to hear.
Really liked the concept as well, real nice
Cold Ground & OutroLoving the beat
Snow's flow is sick on this, liking the insight
Wasn't a fan of the hook at first, but it grew on me
I don't really feel the correlation between your verse and Snow's though, his seem real personal and yours kinda doesnt
I do still think yours fits the song though, imo much more than Snow's cause Snow's makes the song feel more personal while yours has the kinda anthemic "look where we've gotten" kinda feel to it, while still staying kinda sober to close it. Or maybe i'm chatting shit whatever lmao
I think this worked well as a closer song, not too depressing and the hook i can feel kinda keeps the song from getting too moody.
And the ending with the live performance clip worked perfect, perfect end lol
SOOOOO overall
The accents got in the way of me understanding some of the shit, i aint gonna lie, but i looked past it cause i know that since this is a local tape obviously that's what it's aimed for
I only critiqued so in-depth cause i cant bring myself to just say "yeah dope tape", but that shit is just me being picky, this is a great tape just to listen to and for the audience it's aimed at i can tell there'll be no problem. Well, was no problem, it took me so long to feed this shit that it's already been out for ages anyway. But i owed you this shit lol.
You guys don't need any "tips" on how to flow or write lyrics, obviously got it nailed, so there aint much to say, but like i say i can't just leave a fuckin 3 sentence post for a tape review lol, it's just my nature
I liked the feel and theme of the tape as well, the skits are really well-made and they sound real as opposed to sounding like you just Googled "pub sounds" lol
I really can't complain about this tape, it was good, obviously the accent will mean barely anyone on here will be able to properly listen to it though, i mean if people find
my accent hard they would go insane trying to understand Snow on the bits where he flows fast
For real though well done on getting where you have so far, no homo i'm proud of you
My favourite tracks would be:
BBC (Probably my most favourite of the whole tape)
Reflections
Big Boys Don't Cry
Good shit!
