Explicit - Stationed (feat. Big Ax-D) + Mixtape Info

[Tranquil]

Link of feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=101839&p=1402447#p1402447

Okay, im back everybody Now as you can probably see i have changed my rap name, Its "Explicit" now and thats what it is going to stay as This is also the first song that ive released in a couple of months due to internet problems and shit like that.

Im also releasing my first mixtape on the 14th or the 21st of December, its titled "Therapy Treatment" No more playing around, this mixtape IS going to be released on one of those two dates, ive been rapping for little over 2 years now and its time for a mixtape

Now i was going to release this song yesterday for "Remembrance Day" but my internet was playing up so im releasing it today. In America i think you guys call it "Veterans Day" but here in Australia we call it "Remembrance Day" Big Ax-D also delivers a great hook on this track. Any feedback will be appreciated, i will return the feed if asked Anyway enough chit-chat, heres the song:

http://limelinx.com/files/d1be670c7f56c ... e3686ada3b

[gutawafang]

Nice!!!

[Tranquil]

can i get a little more feedback? haha

[Solace]

Pretty decent track, I actually really like the concept. Big Ax-D has made a pretty good hook, but I felt his little moaning "Badadaum" things before the first verse were unnecessary.It worked at the end of the song though. Something about his quality sounded weird, probably the mixing though because a lot of his other tracks are very crisp. I like your voice, it's pretty good for rapping and you don't have to work hard to change it up to something that is enjoyable to hear. Your lyrics were pretty good, you took the role well. "Explicit" is a good name btw.

[Tranquil]

Pretty decent track, I actually really like the concept. Big Ax-D has made a pretty good hook, but I felt his little moaning "Badadaum" things before the first verse were unnecessary.It worked at the end of the song though. Something about his quality sounded weird, probably the mixing though because a lot of his other tracks are very crisp. I like your voice, it's pretty good for rapping and you don't have to work hard to change it up to something that is enjoyable to hear. Your lyrics were pretty good, you took the role well. "Explicit" is a good name btw.

thanks bro glad that you liked it

[gutawafang]

Sorry for not feeding.

Seriously, this track is fucking dope man. It's up there man. Nice chorus too by Ax. Lyrics is fucking good.

[Steve Spag]

Great track man, you and Ax sound good together! You got a pretty good voice man, suits your style nicely. Lyrics are sick, and the flow is pretty hot, especially in the 2nd verse. Really nice man!

[Tranquil]

Great track man, you and Ax sound good together! You got a pretty good voice man, suits your style nicely. Lyrics are sick, and the flow is pretty hot, especially in the 2nd verse. Really nice man!

thanks bro look out for the first single off of my mixtape coming soon

[Tranquil]

buuuuuuuump

[M15HKA]

Just realized i never gave you a feed in this thread bro.

First off i like the track a lot, reckon you have a sick style/flow. First time i listened to it i was expecting some annoying Aussie Hip Hop style voice like Hilltop Hoods but this is pleasant on the ears Lyrics were on point(2cnd verse was dope). Looking forward to the mixtape

[Tranquil]

Just realized i never gave you a feed in this thread bro.

First off i like the track a lot, reckon you have a sick style/flow. First time i listened to it i was expecting some annoying Aussie Hip Hop style voice like Hilltop Hoods but this is pleasant on the ears Lyrics were on point(2cnd verse was dope). Looking forward to the mixtape

thanks bro, glad you liked it and yeah the mixtape will be coming out eirther December 14th or December 21st

[youngfire420]

This track is really dope bro! Your flow has really gotten better. Its more smooth. The hook was okay, think it could've used some work though. Nice track all around though.

[Jaz]

The verses sound pretty good to me. The accent on the hook I'm not really feeling.. I'm assuming that's big ax and he already knows how I feel about that.

Overall I'd give your parts a solid 7.5-8

The hook I just won;t rate because of the above mentioned reasons.

[Tranquil]

thank you all for your feed, the tape is coming along just the way i wanted it

[Le Tunisien]

i downloaded this..hmm i thought the hook is dope as usual by ax, and as for ur verses... ur flow is getting better,hmm as for the delivery its was like okay,felt like it got boring at the end cuz it sounded like the same thing over...i like the lyrics hmm, good track