NEW SPAG (2 Songs)

[Steve Spag]

For those who don't have me on Facebook or havn't yet heard....

"Runnin' Away" - Beat Produced By TR's "Rises From The Ashez" - Big Ups!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iS380E2YPS0

"Where I Belong (In The Distance)"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3TYW5ZOM78

Other links to hear/download the songs are;
http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag
http://www.myspace.com/stevespag
http://www.youtube.com/stevespag
http://www.reverbnation.com/stevespag
http://www.twitter.com/stevespag

Link Of Feed;
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[Solace]

Pretty sick beat by Rise From The Ashez. I loved both songs, I can't decide which I enjoy better tbh. Your flow has evolved to be really really smooth and sick. I love the chorus in Where I Belong. You did a great chorus to Runnin' Away, pretty catchy. Your delivery is set. I can't really see any problems. keep it up spag!

[Steve Spag]

Thanks guys, glad you are diggin' the tracks!

[Terry_M]

I enjoyed both tracks, you are very creative and have a unique style. There's a lot of lines in your lyrics that strike me hard because they are a bit "out there", but trust me that's not an insult.

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks, haha.

[NicoleEM]

Both sound good but i like Runnin' away more

[Mr. Chambers]

wasn't feeling Runnin away to be 100...just didn't keep my attention


where i belong tho was pretty dope....this is the type of shit you need to concentrate on. This seemed to fit your style and it felt real, where as some of your shit just doesn't match for some reason. This was just different. i dunno what it was, for me your songs are hit or miss. You either make really good tracks, or really boring ones, and i think that has to do with your monotonous delivery. But thats just my opinion. But good effort.

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed everyone!

[Emadyville]

Runnin away- I liked the concept and the hook, the lyrics themselves were good but only in certain parts, so overall this song was just alright imo. Great beat, props to ashes

Where I belong- i like how you tried to fuck with the flow and switch it up, your delivery doesn't fit the lyrics tho, i never feel like you sounded different. you did well in sounding sad but parts that I felt you should put more into it, like where your lyrics seemed like you were pissed I didn't feel it. I'm sure thats just my thoughts and you did how you felt with your lyrics, I would just love to see you show more emotion in terms of angry sometime cause I feel like it make you sound different, cause you often sound the same in terms of your voice, which comes off as a weaker delivery imo. Overall this was a good song, again liked the flow switch, keep puttin out shit homie

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks for the in-depth feed brotha, as always I appreciate your comments/honesty, and I definitely WILL keep putting shit out!

[Steve Spag]

1st Bump!

[WesTMusiK]

I liked them to a certain point. I like the lyrics and the beats but your voice is so monotone.

Remember, your voice is an instrumental aswell. Make it blend with the beat. Your voice is a HUUGE part of how people connect with the song, you want them to hear your pain, anger, happiness, whatever emotion you have you want them to hear it and feel it.

I'm not hating, just some helpful tips. Stay up, man.

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks for the feed man, welcome to the forum!