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Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

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Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Dec 6th, '10, 21:34

I added a chorus to this and Coleon did a verse. Also props to SaJJad for the mixing :worship:



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Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

(Sentus)
I’m on a roll like scotch and I will own my spot
The flow I got has more spins then your whole IPod
I’m past the braggin, this clash has to happen
Come on man you got less fans then Alaskan Cabins
I bask in rappin, I won’t promise immunity
But your albums sell like light bulbs in Amish communities
Be honest with you and me, my skill, you will never top it
My verse has more hotlines then the Trevor project
I won’t ever stop it, you’re done if we begin to feud
The best song on your album was the Sentus Interlude
So fuck gangsters, packin there heat but won’t show
Their faces, I sleep on the streets like hobos
If you're facin me you won’t go, I go harder
Plus you poor on the lines like a Road Marker
I’m so sick when I’m performing on the stage
They have to put the surgeon general’s warning on the page

(Chorus x2)
When I grab the mic and start to roast this beat
No one in this rap game should come close to me
No one in this rap game can try and boast like me
Cause I'll slaughter anyone who tryna' 'proach this heat

(Sentus)
I ain’t here to start braggin and boastin on tracks
I am just sitting here relaxin, proposin the facts
All these dudes rappin and knowin there wack
Are done, when I come back in I’m closin the acts
Imposin my wrath, ferocious in fact, leavin more dead
I tore shreds with more hotlines then Satan’s forehead
I don’t ignore threats, the skill you have immersed
Will soon fire shots that will fill you when dispersed
I’ll put you on my album but I’ll bill you on the verse
You couldn’t rip the second if I killed you on the first
I’m grim reapin this bitch, get heaved in a ditch
As I conjure rhymes straight from the deepest abyss
There’s no reason for this, you don’t need to fuckin tell us
What to do, one punch and your guts will swell up
I’m from Dayton now and I’m ready to take em out
So cut the tongue from Satans mouth and shut the hell up
(Chorus x2)

(Coleon)
Pyromaniacs we're known to just slaughter cats
Y'all can take a hike like motherfuckin quarterbacks
The Gods of rap, the type that hoes get to know
We call em laundry mats, we give em multiple loads
Lo and behold, these rappers fumbled the crown
I'm X-Box and Game Cube'in, never playin around
Dumb it down? That's kinda hard cause I got this
Poison in my pen, you can compare it to Auschwitz
Hot shit, it's Quasimodo bringin em hell
I'd never back down without first ringin their bells
Suit yourselves...never mind go and shoot yourself
Depressed? I bet a lead aspirin from a Rugar helps
I do it well...all your features are wack
Me Plus-Sentus is how u-ethra a track
Yeah I rap...You want my autograph lady?
Handover your kid and I will sign that baby!!!
(Chorus x2)

Look for new music soon, and if anyone wants to collab then PM me!

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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby Robbie G » Dec 6th, '10, 21:38

I don't have time to leave feed right now, but I saw you post this on Facebook and it's dope. :worship:
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby D-IX » Dec 6th, '10, 22:16

The mixing is great, you guys are alright, I see potential. :y:
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby Vettori » Dec 7th, '10, 00:00

I Actually like the way you flowed on this..Was very cleanly done..Smooth delivery.. Your quality lacks.
Hmm i didnt get to listen to all of it, but ima come back and listen again when i get the chance
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby mceddie » Dec 7th, '10, 05:38

the beat goes hard :worship:

the verses were pretty decent aswell, nothing spectacular, but good job overall.

7/10/
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Dec 7th, '10, 23:15

Thanks guys :worship:
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby mcZu » Dec 8th, '10, 21:31

Sentus, your flow was good, at some spots it was rushed, and a lil' choppy, though. The hook really didn't sound good to me, difference in quality from verses to hook, kinda takes the song down. Breaath control needs a lil work, delivey sounded not bad, can always sound better, though. Your rap voice is definitely dope.

Coleon, your flow started off good, but then it got choppy, then you regained yourself again, then choppy again, then you picked it up again. Delivery lacking some confidence.

Lyrically both of you came correct.

The hook and the devilish laugh at the end of Cole's verse ruin the song, imo.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Dec 9th, '10, 20:35

Thanks Zu, I'll try and work on that stuff.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 9th, '10, 21:36

Great verses and beat. The end of the hook sounds rushed and doesn't flow well. Overall great track.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Dec 11th, '10, 19:58

Thanks bro, and I literally freestyled the hook on spot so that's why it wasn't very good lol
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 11th, '10, 20:23

Sorry it took me so long to feed but I actually listened first day you dropped it. I thought it was a pretty hot track, both you guys are improving like crazy and are definitely earning your spot! Lyrics, flow were both good from both of you so keep it up!
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Dec 13th, '10, 14:35

Thanks Steve, that means a lot

We should collab sometime :worship:
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 17th, '10, 21:40

classthe_king wrote:Thanks Steve, that means a lot

We should collab sometime :worship:

No doubt brother, sometime in the new year I'm down!
Check my new tracks man, let me know what ya' think!
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 17th, '10, 21:48

wow, slaughter says it all, you guys murdered this track! that shit is pretty badass 9.5/10 everyone!
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Re: Pyromaniacs- The Slaughter

Postby Mahmoud48 » Dec 18th, '10, 02:10

i never thought i would say this but it was good :y:
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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