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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » Mar 25th, '06, 04:46

thats a good poem man... and im sorry... did u just breal up with sumone?
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Mar 25th, '06, 04:51

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:thats a good poem man... and im sorry... did u just breal up with sumone?


ya it wuz rly good........i wuz thinkin the same thing.....did u break up wit sum1.......or r u lonely
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » Mar 25th, '06, 04:54

Lil' PimP wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:thats a good poem man... and im sorry... did u just breal up with sumone?


ya it wuz rly good........i wuz thinkin the same thing.....did u break up wit sum1.......or r u lonely



in her other poem... she talks about a guy thats her friend and stuff.... i think thats who this is about.... am i right sweety?
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Postby tamara » Mar 25th, '06, 12:21

man u right just in a way..i love your poems!!!i think it is good to write when we feel sad or angry..whatever...but i love it!!!really!keep writting :worship:
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » Mar 26th, '06, 00:17

well sweety..... if u never ask how he feels... ull never know..... and u could be missing out on a beautiful and forefilling relationship......

and if he dosent u can move on and find sumone who DOES love u and u can finally heal and move on and be happy without the burdon ur carying right now........ true love will set u free..... its a beautiful thing..... but its also a leap of faith.... its a risk..... and if u dont take it, u could miss out on the best thing in ur life..... just follow ur heart and ur instincts and u will find inner peace and spiritual bliss
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Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 26th, '06, 00:32

i like this poem. i had a friend who had the same probem as you except he was a guy. just ask the worse he can say is no. i would say more but i'll keep it to myself till you ask. :flower:
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » Mar 26th, '06, 01:26

TruEmFan wrote:yeah... i guess i see what ur sayin, sarah.

but you can't help who you love, ya know? i wish i could tell myself to just top and move on... but you can't. you can't ignore something that huge.

and yeah monkey... i know. ask him. i will... soon :whistle:


that a girl :) go get him tiger \:D/ lol
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