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NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

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NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 3rd, '10, 21:31

Well this was recorded during the early summer of this year, but this is new to most people. I just released this track a couple days ago via Facebook, Youtube, Soundclick, and today it's TR's turn!

Link to Feedback;
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=102582

New Song;
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=9943148
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eO6P3CS5EJs
http://www.reverbnation.com/stevespag
http://www.twitter.com/stevespag

Lyrics;

i'm on a desert road, yo where do i go?
shit, i don't even know the direction of home
i keep stressin' out, i'm walkin' all alone
i got no one to call and i've got nobody to hold
i've got this compus that's broke, what good is that gonna do
when the sand keeps comin' at me while the tumbleweeds just skip through?
it's one hot day in the summer and i've been stuck here for weeks
i'm tryin' to find my way out here 'cause i am sick of this heat
come and walk in my shoes, see how far you would get
with these obstacles in your path man, you would cautiously step
anywhere that went, yep, it's a reality
and my mentality can no longer battle this tragedy
that's goin' on inside of my head, can't get it out of me
i'm fightin' 'til the death of me, going like a battery
nothing here is settling
and now i'm burning like acetylene, it's time to get up now and let 'er breathe
'cause

i keep travelling this road in the daytime
but at the end of the day i'm still lost man
yo i don't even think i'm livin' the same life anymore
i guess somewhere i must've fell off
but i keep travelling this road in the daytime
and at the end of the day i'm still lost
i don't know who to trust, i don't know who to turn anymore
so i'll just keep walkin' the road that i'm on

i got a lot of time, and it's all to myself
ain't no point in crying for me, i'll keep denying your help
you got me feeling like one of my old rhyme binder's that's shelved
just useless, but i gotta get up out of this hell now
you can see for yourself, you could ask jen, noel
they know what i'm talking about, this thing's got me feeling profound
yeah this rap game has changed me, i see my dream on that cloud 9
and now that i see you i'm coming, and it will pierce it through sound
you should fear me 'bout now, i don't speak for the giggles
i do what i do just to reach you, although it's frequently riddles
but it's all got a meaning though, you just gotta find it
what good would it be if i told ya'? think of it just an like an assignment
like in science class, my song's just like a frog so disect it
'cause each song's got a message, how could you not have guessed this?
i'm restless, but i won't ever stop or cave in
because i'm walking steady just like walter payton

i keep travelling this road in the daytime
but at the end of the day i'm still lost man
yo i don't even think i'm livin' the same life anymore
i guess somewhere i must've fell off
but i keep travelling this road in the daytime
and at the end of the day i'm still lost
i don't know who to trust, i don't know who to turn anymore
so i'll just keep walkin' the road that i'm on

i'm on my lonely today, it's only me that you're seeing
yeah once again i'm abanonded, another night that is sleepless
there's too many of 'em lately and frankly i've lost count
now you're faced with a new steven that's taking you all down
and don't act like you're surprised man, i told ya' what's coming
yeah, i warned ya' soo many times that it must've been dozens
so it's your fault that you wern't prepared, i wasn't frontin'
i was telling you the truth while you all thought i was buggin' out
but i wasn't, everything i've done was for somethin'
check my tracks for substance, i don't rap just for nothin'
the passion's lacking in everyone else but mine has just doubled
now i'm gettin' the touchdowns, while all of ya'll got the fumbles
and once this song has been finished bitch, you'll wish i would crumble
because got i got this sick sickness ever since i could first mumble
and i don't see a cure for it, not that i want it
'cause it's a writing disease i got and enticement is constant
while

i keep travelling this road in the daytime
but at the end of the day i'm still lost man
yo i don't even think i'm livin' the same life anymore
i guess somewhere i must've fell off
but i keep travelling this road in the daytime
and at the end of the day i'm still lost
i don't know who to trust, i don't know who to turn anymore
so i'll just keep walkin' the road that i'm on

Leave Feedback Please!!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby mceddie » Dec 4th, '10, 10:03

As always, dope as hell. flow is on point, lyrics are on point. 8/10.


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 4th, '10, 16:26

^^
Thanks man. I'm recording that first track next week, it's gonna be called "On The Hold" and I'll send you an mp3 within a week!

Keep the feed coming people, don't be lazy!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby classthe_king » Dec 4th, '10, 18:31

This was pretty good man, I was diggin it. I don't really like the style but you're doing your thing. Lyrics were alright, nothing eye popping though. Your delivery got pretty boring though. It's always the same.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 5th, '10, 00:29

^^
Thanks kind sir!

Keep the feed coming guys!!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Tha Q » Dec 5th, '10, 21:13

Beat is rockin...love it

feelin the vibe of this track

nice rhyming


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 7th, '10, 03:38

Much thanks everyone!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby NicoleEM » Dec 14th, '10, 18:52

I like this :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Dec 14th, '10, 20:16

SHIT WASS IIGHT! :y:
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 14th, '10, 21:45

Merci!
I have newer music though if you're interested, available @ viewtopic.php?f=38&t=103994

More new music in a few days folks, thanks for the love!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "Desert Road"

Postby Mr. Chambers » Dec 15th, '10, 00:38

beat isnt my cup of tea but isnt bad. flow was okish there was a couple spots where it was shakey, but overall solid. lyrics were mehish, but the message and emotion you relayed through your lyrics was pretty decent. But with that being said, your delivery still sounds exactly the same. You could of done alot more with this delivery wise. there were spots where you could put more aggression or anger in it and it would made the lines pretty epic. You just really need to get that down, becuz tbh from what i've heard your not lyrically the strongest, and if you don't have the best lyrics, its cuz you sound passionate. your lyrics got the potential, but your delivery is selling them short.
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