Eminem's lyrics (Current) - Fear

[mangomunky]

By the time his next album drops, he'll be rapping about brand new things, probably

I hope, but main hope that he something make with his recitation.

i'm not trying to pick on you or anything, but could you reword it a little bit?

[JAGODA]

By the time his next album drops, he'll be rapping about brand new things, probably

I hope, but main hope that he something make with his recitation.

i'm not trying to pick on you or anything, but could you reword it a little bit?

What?

This thread or this sentence?

[Master Chief]

look bro,Em cant shit out renegade's.

but he is still the best to every rap IMO!

and what is his last song about love.

LTWYL Pt. II was his last "love verse"

and he killed that

get the fuck out of here with that bullshit.

The truth

[mangomunky]

@jagoda that one sentence. were you talking about his delivery or ?

[JAGODA]

@jagoda that one sentence. were you talking about his delivery or ?

Yes exactly... I told about his delivery I hope that will be better than now...

[Innovation]

The only thing eminem has fallen off from his lyrics/writing ability is mulits, double and tripple sylable rhyming. As overrated as multis can be at times there still very important to hip hop and eminem now compared to old eminem his first 3 albums along with infinite the big time rhyming isnt there, i think his writing ability is better but if he can put more multis in verses it would be that much better. But when your storytelling its a very difficult thing to do.

Last two albums, particularly Relapse have been packed with multis. Sure Recovery didn't contain as many as Relapse, but they were defiantly there.

Stay Wide Awake, 3 am, Hello, Same Song and Dance, Deja Vu, GTC, On Fire, So Bad, Untitled. I mean the list goes on and on.

There's no way you can justify that he's feel off with multis.

[mangomunky]

@jagoda that one sentence. were you talking about his delivery or ?

Yes exactly... I told about his delivery I hope that will be better than now...

well i guess it kinda depends on what he wants to do. voice wise, he can sounds non-shouty like in his original first verse of that's all she wrote. and he's still capable of flowing smoothly as evidenced in the 4th verse of going through changes

but in the original post you were only complaining about his lyrics. good lyrics don't always guarantee good delivery

[thefranchise4]

Recovery its my 3rd fav eminem album, but its right there with encore for the worst when it comes to multis, and on fire barely has any multis lol, multis are overrated i was just making a point.

[Innovation]

Recovery its my 3rd fav eminem album, but its right there with encore for the worst when it comes to multis, and on fire barely has any multis lol, multis are overrated i was just making a point.

On Fire does have multis.

[Master Chief]

Recovery its my 3rd fav eminem album, but its right there with encore for the worst when it comes to multis, and on fire barely has any multis lol, multis are overrated i was just making a point.

On Fire is filled with multis. Look again buddy.

[Innovation]

Recovery its my 3rd fav eminem album, but its right there with encore for the worst when it comes to multis, and on fire barely has any multis lol, multis are overrated i was just making a point.

On Fire is filled with multis. Look again buddy.

Exactly. Song is packed with them lol.

[Master Chief]

Let's see...

[Verse 1]
Yesterday my dog died, I hog tied a ho, tied her in a bow
Said next time you blow up try to spit a flow
You wanna criticize dawg try a little mo'
I'm so tired of this I could blow, fire in the hole
I'm fired up so fire up the lighter and the dro
Better hold on a little tighter here I go
Flows tighter, hot headed as ghostrider
Cold hearted as spiderman throwin a spider in the snow
So ya better get lower than Flo-Rida inside of a lowrider with no tires in the hole
Why am I like this? why is winter cold
Why is it when I talk I'm so biased to the hoes
Listen dog Christmas is off this is as soft as it gets
This isnt golf this is a blisterin' assault
Those are your wounds this is the salt
So get lost
Shit dissin me is just like pissin off the wizard of oz
Wrap a lizard in gauze beat you in the jaws with it
Grab the scissors and saws and
Cut out your livers gizzards and balls
Throw you in the middle of the ocean in the blizzard with jaws
So sip piss like sizzurp through a straw
Then describe how it tasted like dessert to us all
Got the gall to make chris piss in his draws
Tickling him go to his grave, skip him and visit his dog

I probably missed some.

And not to mention how he keeps that "is" sound through the last part of the verse.

[Hadez]

once again, if the syllables don't match it's not a rhyme. "tired of this i could blow" is way too many syllables to rhyme with anything there.

other than that, yes "On Fire" has multis

[Master Chief]

once again, if the syllables don't match it's not a rhyme. "tired of this i could blow" is way too many syllables to rhyme with anything there.

other than that, yes "On Fire" has multis

The rhyme, dawg try a little mo'/tired of this I could blow has 6 syllables. Starting with the stretched rhyme tired/dawg and ending with the rhyme blow/mo'.

So, yes that is a multi.

[Hadez]

once again, if the syllables don't match it's not a rhyme. "tired of this i could blow" is way too many syllables to rhyme with anything there.

other than that, yes "On Fire" has multis

The rhyme, dawg try a little mo'/tired of this I could blow has 6 syllables. Starting with the stretched rhyme tired/dawg and ending with the rhyme blow/mo'.

So, yes that is a multi.

dawg rhymes with tired now? even when he tries to "slant" it it sounds off. so really only mo and blow rhyme.