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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Mar 26th, '06, 00:43

ok heres another 1......

[verse 1]
Now when I speak truth, I get labelled as an asshole
Say what i see, talk what i know
Stay young, 'n act out
Never back out, dont make assumptions
Tracks hit and I still spit substance
Yes y'all, straight killin the public
Over the top with next to no budget
Kids' tight, but gotta stay focused
Rip mics, ripped off by promoters
Handle my biz Keep my hands clean
I roll wit a crew, but Im a one man team
and, doesnt matter if you think Im hot or not
Just keep talkin bout me at the barber shop
No names drop, that can give you props
Dont be jealous, some day my reign will stop
But until then Im still gunna do this
Without music, Im basically useless
Stand here for another 10 years
Wit a mic in my hand and a beat in my ear...

[chorus]
Now let me make myself clear, im lonely here for a minute
Need to get this off of my mind, just let me handle my business
Im takin it one at a time, Ive just begun so jus listen
listen, listen, so listen, listen, listen...

[verse 2]
And I know what I've done
I've done more than the artist in your story
Go ahead, don't bother to support me
There's so much hate in my own territory
I'll still lay tracks to rest
Live, in effect, im in the flesh, man
I should teach rappin steps
Sell it to whack council, paperback and secs, yes
I'll do what I need to survive this
Aint goin back to the 9 to 5 shifts
Tryin to make noise, but I move in silence

[chorus]
Now let me make myself clear, im lonely here for a minute
Need to get this off of my mind, just let me handle my business
Im takin it one at a time, Ive just begun so jus listen
listen, listen, so listen, listen, listen...


:unsure: btw it aint rly about nething
i hope its ok....
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Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 26th, '06, 00:48

it's pretty good but there's one things missing and it's an...........AUDIO :p


stole my kirby t(' 't) :tounge2:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Mar 26th, '06, 00:50

MuNxMuN wrote:it's pretty good but there's one things missing and it's an...........AUDIO :p


stole my kirby t(' 't) :tounge2:


lmao FINE ill audio then..... :sweating: yes my kirbys better it has pointy arms
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Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 26th, '06, 01:09

Lil' PimP wrote:
MuNxMuN wrote:it's pretty good but there's one things missing and it's an...........AUDIO :p


stole my kirby t(' 't) :tounge2:


lmao FINE ill audio then..... :sweating: yes my kirbys better it has pointy arms


you better audio lol.......can't wait \:D/
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » Mar 26th, '06, 03:05

[color=darkred]thats good man... keep it up...... and like winnie said, give us sum audio :flower: [/color]
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