classthe_king wrote:Well, you have the same quality as then, the same flow, the same delivery. You have some stand out points like the Don't Sign Me Intro or Birth of a Hero but lyrically you haven't progressed much either. If I posted a song like All of Me and then posted your Shadows song I don't think someone who doesn't listen to you would be able to tell which song was recent and which song was old.
^i can kinda agree with the delivery, like i said before its something i'm always fighting to improve cuz it always seems to be my weakness. quality? i REALLY think you need to relisten. my old shit had a very dirty sound to it back then becuz of lack of equipment and i did switch that up. As far as flow, i think that's really due to delivery, cuz i switch rhyme schemes and i'm working on changing up the speed a bit.
as far as lyrically, and i'm not saying this to toot my own horn, i just dunno what you expect in that aspect. out of all the shit, i can easily say i'm top 3 lyrically on here and can hang, if not outshine, alot of MC's in that aspect. i think anon and Zu are really the only two that would give me a serious run.
like i said i'm not trying to sound cocky cuz i can honestly admit to my faults and shit. I'm just trying to get the most clarity out of your feedback that i can.
i have nothing bad to say about this track, 5/5 
