Zu - Dead Wrong Freestyle

[mcZu]

Link of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=104361

Zu - Dead Wrong Freestyle (Usershare)
Zu - Dead Wrong Freestyle (Hulkshare)

Lyrics:
This is bound to be catastrophic
Bountiful charismatic, rhetorical acrobatic
Not just under your fabric with my speech
My bar-be disrespecting B, ask Eric
I’m eccentric though rational
Hungry like a cannibal on a diet
Always have a plan like Hannibal
Lyrics flammable not edible
Words move in high decibels
You’ll get fractioned like decimals
You’re just terrible, just read a bull-
Shit article about how radical
Hip Hop is... Not Pop ish
I be going deep I define what the mob is
People think that Lust is what Love is
But trust it, it’s by far bits
Of trust that mark bliss
So I carved this while listening to Ice-T no Lipton
I’m so dope, when I ride I get arrested like Paris Hilton
I don’t need to be tested
My lyrics reach people like I faxed it
Nobody can save you I hacked it
So you can ask me what’s crackalackin?
I’m back with the rapping acting
As I should like the rapping back in
The golden era when they were packing facts in
Verses, check the facts, they’re lacking tact in
Their verses, they’re slacking when they’re attacking
I’m hacking a track in pieces when I’m tracking a hack in
I’m on deck in an attacking mode not backpacking
Though traveling with who? Ask Inspectah Deck in
A Tweet, when I be backing the truth
The ignorant youth thinks they’re having a blast
I just attack them with a circular blast
‘cause I don’t hold back like a vertebra cast
I’m not what’s popular
Nor what’s popping, bruh
I think I’m stopping bruh
Enough for ya...

[Mr. Chambers]

up on something else....it isn't letting me play.

[mcZu]

I've added a Hulkshare link.

[dR3]

I think you sound robotic and the flow is too choppy. It doesn't sound natural, so work on that.

They say practice makes perfect.

[mcZu]

^Thanks for the feedback.

[Mr. Chambers]

this was a step back imo zu. Your flow was choppy, it was boring, lyrics were simplistic and the punches weren't inventive.

not much i can really say but step it up, this sounds more like a first recording then a couple months in recording.

[mcZu]

Because this is very old, lol. Thanks for the feed, though.

[Mr. Chambers]

drop new shit then!!!!!

or re-record it.....at least try to make it sound better god dammit!

[mcZu]

^I'm out of ideas. I'm fiending for a collab though. Got something for me?

[Mr. Chambers]

^I'm out of ideas. I'm fiending for a collab though. Got something for me?

i actually do. i'm recording it tonight, so if you can wait for a few hours.

[mcZu]

^Alright!