Explicit - Stick With This

[Tranquil]

This is one of the many little "promo" songs that im gonna drop in the next coming weeks tell me what you think

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[Tranquil]

that was fuckin awessome! and the beat was just amazing
and now im just gonna stick with this song

hahaha thanks man

[mdemaz]

HOLY SHIT!
That was dope as fuck man.
I seriously can't criticize that because it's so epic.

The lyrics were so dark the guitar rifts gave me goosebumps.
The hook was rapping which was a bit different but that's cool.
A lot of themes of poverty I can relate too.

[Solace]

The chorus has a LOT of flow slip ups. Your rhymes are relatively simple, but not everyone's in multi's so that's cool. A couple of noticeable slip ups in the verse too. Decent enough, you've improved a lot. Your delivery is pretty nice Work on mixing, overlays and adlibs too, I think you could do your tracks more justice that way

[Tranquil]

@ mdemaz - thanks man, glad that you liked it
@ Solace - thanks for the feed, you always do great feed. I will work harder on my adlibs and whatnot.. i actually am into multis and that, you will see when my mixtape drops bro thanks again

[Tranquil]

so are you gonna do our track with noble?

i still gotta ask him, he hasnt been online when im on, so yeah

[_Ironic_]

keep rappin like this and you'll have a spot on a future GT ronic album, real talk man

besides the slip ups in the chorus (which is easily fixable) this track was standout, too bad it wasn't longer.


keep at it bro.

[Tranquil]

keep rappin like this and you'll have a spot on a future GT ronic album, real talk man

besides the slip ups in the chorus (which is easily fixable) this track was standout, too bad it wasn't longer.


keep at it bro.

woah! now that would be dope haha thanks for dropping by and listening bro