Tornado: Cold + Visions Of A Dream

[Tornado]

Two Tracks From "Raw As Fuck Mixtape V1", Cold & Visions Of A Dream

1. Cold
Produced, Recorded & Mixed by: Tornado
Song about the streets

Link
http://tornadomusiczone.weebly.com/cold.html

2. Visions Of A Dream
Produced by: AllRounda Productions
Recorded by: Bankz
Mixed by: Tornado

Clue's in the title

Link
http://www.mediafire.com/?fk9ptsu3f3nhavm

I'm not gonna post lyrics since i wanna see if people can understand my pronounciation more. They will be up on my site (click on my sig) when RAF is released. Tape will be out prob end of month/ beg of next month since i'm making 200 physical copies to give out locally. Fuck boring you with delay details

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your pronouncation is getting better man, alot better than when you started out, tracks are coming along aswell man, keep at it, uk hip hop woot woot!

[_Ironic_]

aight listenin

the beat is kinda creepy, but I like the slowness of it

the first verse was really really really bad. im sorry, horrible flow, couldn't understand barely anything u said and the delivery was aweful.

chorus, was actually decent..comes in on point with the beat, and it's catchy besides a few slip ups

2nd verse not much better than the first, same with 3rd



ehh not my steez at all, wasn't feelin anything about this couldn't understand you, the flow was very choppy, your delivery wasn't confident. keep tryin though

3/10

[Tornado]

Cheers for feedback you two.

[B.A.D.]

i listened to Cold.

nice page btw.

you need to improve the overall mixing. the volume of the track is too low and your pellas sound to overshadowing on it. cuz your acapella does sound clean but the overall thing is just bad mixed. you need to fix that. maybe also play around with noise gates so you can get rid of that hiss.

I honestly didnt liked it too much, the beat is too empty, it does suit you but its not that much interesting. the accent is heavy but I manage to understand a bit, I also dont like the flow a lot, I think its not matched well with the beat, like if you recorded it and then just added it to the beat. I dont know, you should try to go smoother on it. the hook is nice, but when you speak over it, makes it sound choppy.

its alright I guess, but definitively needs improvement. the lyrics are great tho, so just work on the mixing and the flow man.

hope I helped

[Tornado]

Props on the in depth feed Ax, though i would like to hear opinions on Visions Of A Dreams also aswell people but props for checking anyways