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Rap i wrote for my dad

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Jan 7th, '11, 09:58

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Re: Rap i wrote for my dad

Postby Enimee » Jan 8th, '11, 19:52

lyrically from a rap persepective this is lackin in certain areas no doubt, but its verrry artistic and i respect the hell out of u for it, great work def felt the emotion in it reall good real real reall good two thumbs up
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Re: Rap i wrote for my dad

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Jan 8th, '11, 21:15

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Re: Rap i wrote for my dad

Postby SlimShadyX313X » Jan 8th, '11, 22:00

Good job :y: :y:

the first couple lines were really good too me
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“Dealing with backstabbers,
there was one thing I learned. They're only powerful when you got your back turned.”

Brain damage, ever since the day I was born
Drugs is what they used to say I was on
They say I never knew which way I was goin
But everywhere I go they keep playin my song.
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Re: Rap i wrote for my dad

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Jan 9th, '11, 05:46

SlimShadyX313X wrote:Good job :y: :y:

the first couple lines were really good too me



thanks man :y:
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Postby sneekyaddman88 » Jan 9th, '11, 10:23

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Re: Rap i wrote for my dad

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Jan 12th, '11, 04:46

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Postby sneekyaddman88 » Jan 26th, '11, 02:00

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