Amadeo wrote:There's no way this song was written by Eminem in the TES era, now that I think about it.
It's not good enough structurally. But whoever wrote it has done a good job imitating the tone of his TES releases.
Rhyme-wise, it sounds more like Eminem on Devil's Night. He did those crazy/angry/baby rhymes too much on that album (Fight Music), along with using "shit" and "bitch" to rhyme (Ain't Nuttin' But Music).
Unless he's got a good flow going on, the first part of the second verse is too poor, lyrically, for Eminem back then.
I like how positive you can be about this haha. But I agree it doesn't sound like a TES song, especially since it features Bizarre. Really who the hell knows.
And you think the first part of the second verse was poor??? It beats the entire 1st verse easily IMO. Look at the multis:
It’s
apparent that I’m less of
parentCuz my daughters’
inheritance was made off of all these
disparagingComments and
remarks in my songs
It’s
remarkable how you fucking
retards are so quick to
discardMy
discographyAs
just scarring theseInnocent kids, maybe I should switch to
R&BBut
honestly, being honest is
like a job for meWhy the fuck you think my mom
tried stopping me?
Every time I
hop in my booth they
dropping a lawsuit And
talking on the news how I’m
causing the cops toHave to deal with a wave of
bleached blonde bastardsAnd put me on blast, they just
keep on after