K.O King

[JBM]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zzKisp9O9vs

Feed : viewtopic.php?f=38&t=105872&p=1479265#p1479265

[Scrubz]

Ushare sucks donkey dick so I can't listen on my iPhone, as soon as I get home to my computer il listen and feed, in the mean time please feed me kind sir viewtopic.php?f=38&t=105991

[JBM]

[Scrubz]

dude the hook, was amazing. The delivery was ridiculous! the verses were pretty good, although the flow seemed forced at times, like you were trying to put a couple extra syllables in when it didnt need it. I loved your voice in the hook but in the verses idk, i didnt dig it as much. loved the punch lines and the beat was sick. 7.5/10 Keep it up man, you got skills! hit me up if you wanna collab, i got mad beats!

[JBM]

Thx man. Yea something bout this beat i didn't feel comfortable on but it sounded hot so i wanted to do it. And about a collab, if you've got a idea get at me.

[JBM]

[JBM]

This forum is terrible to get feedback on. Waste of time.

[B.A.D.]

sorry, havent had too much time

damn son, your flow keeps improving.
would sound pretti good mastered tbh
lol, club track.... the thing tho' is that its missing its catchy party.

If I would be you I would use the Whole second part of the hook with only
"who want it with the knock out king" more constant, and maybe and at the end of the hook with a chopped and screwed voice.

I liked it a lot really... good party track

[JBM]

Thanks for the feed man.

[JBM]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zzKisp9O9vs

[JBM]

up.....