A Verse Over Eminem's Role Model Beat

[solara]

http://soundcloud.com/abdulghany/role-m ... tyle-abdul
tell me what u think

[mdemaz]

You're vocals sound clean...It's a bit off time...Nice loopstrumental actually.
It's too short lol.
Other then that, nice lyrics rofl.

[solara]

which bar? my bars fall right over the beat..
i can still know if im off beat or not..

[classthe_king]

You need a link of feed

[B.A.D.]

You need a link of feed

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I always like when someone raps over this beat, one of my all time favourites.
u need to fix your structure and your lyrics, cuz you have the flow. but need to get it smoother on the beat.

I like the way you mix tho, seems like you have a nice equipment going on there.

but yeah, keep it up.