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Smoke N Ride

Postby Tash8 » Jan 22nd, '11, 06:35

it's not done, but i'm not gonna work on it for a while, soo
o....any feed before i finish would be great

smoke n ride's all we doin tonight[x4]
I roll it up, then smo-smoke it up


ay When I'm clockin out by three
I'll be stocking up on trees
teeth rotten now, from cotten mouth
but I got no drink, no food nothing for me to munch or eat
just weed
so I keep the heat like keak da sneak
but I don't do joints so I keep the piece
it must be
Tash, damn, I put in 'em in amb-u-lance(why)
because they grabbed my grams with hands,
even though, they know they can't
---now if cops comes, I make like khalifa and wiz by
and this time
around, I throwdown pounds like Queen Latifa without a diet
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Re: Smoke N Ride

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 22nd, '11, 07:08

pretty nicee stuff Tash...nothing else I can say really...
you know I got respect for those who smoke n write bout it :p
but I'm really interested in hearing it in audio if you plan on recording :worship:
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Re: Smoke N Ride

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 22nd, '11, 17:24

Yeah man could pick up on the flow pretty well. Like the ambulance/grams with hands part flows really well. Seems like it's gonna turn out to be one of those bumpin in your car kinda joints haha I dig it man Wanna hear it finished :y:
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Re: Smoke N Ride

Postby Tash8 » Jan 22nd, '11, 20:47

good looking guys..
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Re: Smoke N Ride

Postby Emadyville » Jan 22nd, '11, 23:51

love the rhyme with ambulance :8)

gotta hit me up on aim when u record some of this, lookin good son :smoking:
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