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Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Phantom » Jan 22nd, '11, 11:12

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... D=10170247

short bio of the song: going through the worst time of my life..too bad that my best music comes out of times like these. let me know what u guys think


link of feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=106109&p=1489795#p1489795

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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Tash8 » Jan 23rd, '11, 07:32

ok i'm not sure how i feel about the singing man...but the rapping was just awesome, loved the flow, I always been fan of quick stop n go flow like that...I wish you added some overlays to ur verses, woulda emphasized some stuff man..

anyways i still like this, just not feeling the singing.

would love some feed on my new song Let Go man.
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Solace » Jan 23rd, '11, 18:15

This is fucking sick...
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Phantom » Jan 24th, '11, 00:17

tash, i completely agree about the singing. ive been smoking a pack a day and it really has taken a toll on my singing voice, not that i had such a great one before but it has set me back. solace, thanks man, truly appreciate that.
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby classthe_king » Jan 24th, '11, 01:14

My bad dude, I didn't notice until I saw Solace's comment I realized that you were you. But I agree with Solace, this was fucking amazing. I'm goona go post some this on some other forums cause you deserve a lot of attention. I loved the chorus btw, I don't think if you're goona go with the metal you have to be good at singing, it just has to sound real, and this did.
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Scrubz » Jan 24th, '11, 03:45

Dude this is fucking hot as hell. mad original as well. :y: :y: :y: Production is clean, flows and delivery were sick. Hook was pretty good too! wow i reall am feelin this. Hit me up for beats or collab, deff man. :worship:
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Phantom » Jan 24th, '11, 11:44

classthe_king, i appreciate it more than you know. wasunt, you too bro, if you like this song you should check some of the other ones on my page as well. i would love to collab with u.also, i admit to not being a good singer, i cant make excuses for that, some people just dont have that god given talent lol. thanks to all who commented
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Scrubz » Jan 24th, '11, 15:00

Phantom wrote:classthe_king, i appreciate it more than you know. wasunt, you too bro, if you like this song you should check some of the other ones on my page as well. i would love to collab with u.also, i admit to not being a good singer, i cant make excuses for that, some people just dont have that god given talent lol. thanks to all who commented

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=105991 feed me as well if you got the time :whistle:
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 25th, '11, 02:28

you got a damn unique style.

its perfect man. This hook in particular is not my favourite from you. normally your sining is amazing. this hook I didn't like.

flow lmao!... sick. too much, greatness.

hahaha, I can already see you up there. you can maybe fix up the quality to make it sound more studio, u know. its clean as fuck, no hisswhatsoever. but something's missing. too dry.

great job man :y:
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Phantom » Jan 25th, '11, 03:13

thanks ax!
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 25th, '11, 05:27

this is sick..

1st verse was ok..not that impressive.
2nd and third tho...god dam..was sick shit...i loved the flow and lyrics.....jsut very sick. i don't really got much to say

chorus wasn't terrible...but like others said wasn't top notch. but i didn't think it was terrible.

overall a good song..i think the chorus and 1st verse pulled it down from perfection, but still a good song none the less, and good job on making a longer song.
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Phantom » Jan 26th, '11, 03:25

the first part wasnt really a verse it was just a slight continuation of the chorus so i didnt even know where i was going with the track but thanks. and yes i realize the chorus wasnt that great but i cant make excuses for my shitty singing lol. thanks tho chambers
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Re: Phantom-Only I Can See The Truth

Postby Poison Ivy » Jan 27th, '11, 22:13

What a great track !, the chorus was the shit :worship:
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