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Potential - TJB

Postby tjb » Jan 22nd, '11, 03:23

checkk the new song...

over Lil B' beat.. cold war pt.1

feed appreciated...


feedback link:
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=106453


listen here : http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_6892457
SUBSCRIBE : http://www.youtube.com/user/ResidentialNoise

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LISTEN UP: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10104374
lets get this track to number 1!

LIKE IT: http://www.facebook.com/pages/TJB/19056 ... 663?ref=ts
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Re: Potential - TJB

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 22nd, '11, 03:37

prettty fucking raw
your vocals were loud as fuck but :p
forget the mix I liked the rhyming you doing :y:

keep at it
people need to look out for you :b:
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Re: Potential - TJB

Postby tjb » Jan 22nd, '11, 03:39

DƎRDYPK wrote:prettty fucking raw
your vocals were loud as fuck but :p
forget the mix I liked the rhyming you doing :y:

keep at it
people need to look out for you :b:



thankss :flower:
SUBSCRIBE : http://www.youtube.com/user/ResidentialNoise

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papa doc, only thing i dont choke on the mic - redman

LISTEN UP: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10104374
lets get this track to number 1!

LIKE IT: http://www.facebook.com/pages/TJB/19056 ... 663?ref=ts
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Re: Potential - TJB

Postby tjb » Jan 22nd, '11, 17:50

bump :smoking:
SUBSCRIBE : http://www.youtube.com/user/ResidentialNoise

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LISTEN UP: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10104374
lets get this track to number 1!

LIKE IT: http://www.facebook.com/pages/TJB/19056 ... 663?ref=ts
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Re: Potential - TJB

Postby Scrubz » Jan 24th, '11, 03:42

tjb wrote:bump :smoking:

the mixing and the mic are no good but your lyrics delivery and flow is. If you take it seriously and have the cash, id jugest in investing in a new mic and a pre amp or mixer. You got skills bro, keep at it! hit me up if you need a beat or collab :y:
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Re: Potential - TJB

Postby WesTMusiK » Jan 30th, '11, 21:53

I'm diggin' this one. Got some good rhyming in there.

Only beefs I had was work on the mixing and sometimes the flow you force out words. But other than that, it was dope dude. 7.5/10 Keep it up.
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Re: Potential - TJB

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 4th, '11, 05:59

dam my dude...
flow was completely sick. Delivery was pretty good and the lyrics were pretty fresh. plus its BASED!!!!!!!

i still wanna get a collab going. pretty dope bro. only thing is your mixing....fix that shit up and you polished...pause..
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