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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby EminemInsider » Feb 2nd, '11, 03:08

classthe_queen..hate to break it to you, but the majority of the words you have rhymed over the years on here don't actually rhyme, either.
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '11, 04:56

year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '11, 05:01

Amadeo wrote:The most convenient definition of rhyme is if two things sound the same, syllable for syllable, and they're not the same thing (so matter doesn't rhyme with matter). There is no other workable definition.

If you have a ridiculously narrow definition like "the words are the same except the first letter (cat, hat, bat, rat)" then spat isn't a rhyme with cat. Retarded.

So if we're going by two things rhyming if they sound the same, then "screaming go" definitely rhymes with "teen-year-old," given Eminem's Detroit accent. When he says it in Who Knew, those two things have very similar sounds. They rhyme, and it's very clear that he meant for them to rhyme. His enunciation to make them rhyme wasn't forced at all.

He also meant to rhyme "tackle" with "handled" in GTC.

And inverse multis, when used well, can give the line a nice symmetry and it sounds really pleasant to listen to, poetically speaking. I couldn't quite put my finger on why S4TM's second verse ("from standing on corners and porches") sounded so smooth, but it's because of all those rhyme patterns.


Good overall explanation for those who just read the rhymes posted and dont "listen" to the songs :y:
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby EminemInsider » Feb 2nd, '11, 05:39

classthe_king wrote:year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:


:facepalm

Non-stressed syllables don't matter in rap multis.
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '11, 05:41

EminemInsider wrote:
classthe_king wrote:year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:


:facepalm

Non-stressed syllables don't matter in rap multis.


You're right... that part of it needed to rhyme
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby Jim_Halpert » Feb 2nd, '11, 05:46

FreeSpeech wrote:
Pauly D wrote:
FreeSpeech wrote:Do you all seriously not hear these rhymes the first time you listen? I honestly catch every multi and internal he uses, I just hear it. I didn't realize it took skill to hear rhyming words. Sometimes I won't catch punchlines or wordplay, but I never miss rhymes...


God ^^ :worship:

I'm not trying to sound cool, it's not an impressive skill. How do you not hear rhyming words? If they rhyme, they rhyme. You shouldn't have to pay attention and look out for rhymes.

even inverse multis?
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby Bubba » Feb 2nd, '11, 06:49

classthe_king wrote:year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:


how dare he? smh
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby ArsheyHaq » Feb 2nd, '11, 06:57

Come on guys, don't act stupid..you must know by now that rappers say things differently to make things rhyme ALL THE TIME! It's no different with Em, except he does it better than anyone else.

EX: just jokin'/six girlfriends

on "If I Get Locked Up Tonight"

Plus, Em's in-rhymes are raw! Makes me appreciate the rhymes more because it shows how much thought he's put into them. Sometimes they're really hard to spot. Just goes to show, he really does write rhymes for himself, up to his standards, and no one else.

EX: I tried to plead and tell him, "We shouldn't beef"
But he just wouldn't leave, he kept chokin me and I couldn't breathe
He looked at me and said, "You gonna die honkey!"

on "Brain Damage"
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby RainMan44 » Feb 2nd, '11, 07:24

classthe_king wrote:year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:



If you're criticizing the rhymes that we posted so much, saying how they don't rhyme, I can say the same about this line you wrote.

"I just have to stay low and hope to dream
I’ve felt the beauty and the prick that her roses bring"

"Hope to dream" and "roses bring" don't rhyme...BUT if you pronounce them correctly, they do, and it turns out to be a well written rhyme.

If you're going to say that "screaming go/teen year old" don't rhyme, then you should take a look at "hope to dream/roses bring", also.

SO it's OKAY for you to do that, but when Em does it, it's a stupid rhyme?
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby MikeNUFC » Feb 2nd, '11, 14:46

mcZu wrote:Honestly, I never understood why people like songs about rape and serial murders... I mean, it's fiction, obviously, but why would you make a song about that? And why would you listen to it?


So why do authors write crime and murder mysteries? Because it's fascinating and hugely engaging - it's a hugely interesting subject, hence why there is sooooo much work about it.

Saying "why would you listen to it", is like saying why would anyone read Edgar Ellan Poe because he writes about murders. If it's done in an engaging and interesting way, why shouldn't people read it?
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '11, 17:19

RainMan44 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:



If you're criticizing the rhymes that we posted so much, saying how they don't rhyme, I can say the same about this line you wrote.

"I just have to stay low and hope to dream
I’ve felt the beauty and the prick that her roses bring"

"Hope to dream" and "roses bring" don't rhyme...BUT if you pronounce them correctly, they do, and it turns out to be a well written rhyme.

If you're going to say that "screaming go/teen year old" don't rhyme, then you should take a look at "hope to dream/roses bring", also.

SO it's OKAY for you to do that, but when Em does it, it's a stupid rhyme?
:laughing:


:facepalm

rose and hope rhyme. They both have the short o sound.

Dream and bring rhyme

Roses bring and hope to dream deffinitely rhyme :laughing:

And just jokin and six girlfriends do not rhyme at all in the slightest bit. The only thing that rhymes is the in/iend at the end. He doesn't even pronounce them weird to make them rhyme :laughing:

And if you think Eminem is the only one who uses internal multis then you need to listen to more hip-hop
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby MikeNUFC » Feb 2nd, '11, 17:26

classthe_king wrote:Dream and bring rhyme

LOL that is the same kind of rhyme as all the Eminem rhymes you said weren't rhymes.

Saying it normally, it doesn't rhyme at all. If you flow it, then it rhymes fine.

Nothing wrong with that rhyme, but it's the same thing that you slated Em for.
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '11, 17:29

MikeNUFC wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Dream and bring rhyme

LOL that is the same kind of rhyme as all the Eminem rhymes you said weren't rhymes.

Saying it normally, it doesn't rhyme at all. If you flow it, then it rhymes fine.

Nothing wrong with that rhyme, but it's the same thing that you slated Em for.


No because the i and ea make the same sound. So it rhymes.
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 2nd, '11, 17:42

classthe_king wrote:
RainMan44 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:year and ing don't rhyme. That throws it off.

Do you really think you had to go on a rant about rhyming to me :coffee:



If you're criticizing the rhymes that we posted so much, saying how they don't rhyme, I can say the same about this line you wrote.

"I just have to stay low and hope to dream
I’ve felt the beauty and the prick that her roses bring"

"Hope to dream" and "roses bring" don't rhyme...BUT if you pronounce them correctly, they do, and it turns out to be a well written rhyme.

If you're going to say that "screaming go/teen year old" don't rhyme, then you should take a look at "hope to dream/roses bring", also.

SO it's OKAY for you to do that, but when Em does it, it's a stupid rhyme?
:laughing:


:facepalm

rose and hope rhyme. They both have the short o sound.

Dream and bring rhyme

Roses bring and hope to dream deffinitely rhyme :laughing:

And just jokin and six girlfriends do not rhyme at all in the slightest bit. The only thing that rhymes is the in/iend at the end. He doesn't even pronounce them weird to make them rhyme :laughing:

And if you think Eminem is the only one who uses internal multis then you need to listen to more hip-hop

do you mean long o sound?
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Re: Eminem Rhymes People May Not Have Picked Up

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '11, 17:57

Yeah, I realized that after I put it but then I didn't feel like going back and fixing myself.
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