Sentus- Kush Freestyle

[classthe_king]

Alright...last try



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Yo, as I'm rippin this beat
I got a flow like a stove as I'm spittin this heat
And I go after shows just pickin my teeth
Cause I eat rappers that try and get in my beef
Damn...you need to listen to me
Let me plague your ears with this sickening speech
Let me portray your fears with the myth of the beast
I'll go head to head with the most gifted emcees
Damn... then they wish n they plead
That my Hip-Hop would stop killin they dreams
But I won't stop, then cops visit the scene
See the scorch marks and know in an instant it's me
Damn...I'm the most vicious to be
Alive when I vibe I hit quick with defeat
You wanna find the prize well this is the key
Pyromaniacs...the reign goes on infinitely




http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107197&p=1499557#p1499557

[MikeNUFC]

Your flow is improving a ton. Your breath control is a million times better than that Airplanes freestyle, you sound like a different person, and that's in short space of time.

The flow on this bit, especially the bolded part, was fantastic.

Damn... then they wish n they plead
That my Hip-Hop would stop killin they dreams
But I won't stop, then cops visit the scene
See the scorch marks and know in an instant it's me
Damn...I'm the most vicious to be
Alive when I vibe I hit quick with defeat
You wanna find the prize well this is the key
Pyromaniacs...we go on infinitely

Rhyming was pretty good, liked some of the wordplay. But I guess flow is the most important thing for you at the moment.

And I'm assuming you changed that last line to fit your flow ('the reign' to 'we'). Might wanna edit the lyrics.

[classthe_king]

Thanks Mike, that means a lot

I've really worked hard on my flow and breath control and it's great to hear that I've improved that much. I'm not focusing on lyrics now but once I get a good flow and lyrics...watch out

[Kez]

This was pretty good, your delivery is nice and clear and strong, the flow for the most part was pretty good but i thought i could hear a couple times where you almost got lost behind the beat but you recovered before it could happen. The lyrics were good for what it was, just a little 16, considering it's on the Kush beat it could have just been garbage but at least there's obviously some effort put into it.

Yeah this was pretty good, i'm interested to hear actual tracks though

[NicoleEM]

I liked it,sounded pretty good to me class,keep up the good work

[Jaz]

To be honest not a huge fan of this one.. The lyrics were solid, I just don't like your voice on this particular beat I think.

Not bad, just not a fan of it.

Maybe it's just because I'm used to Snoop being on it and then it's a blatantly white man, haha.

[B.A.D.]

I dont know if I have gone crazy but I'm 100% sure that I fed this, and I dont know where my post went... I think I also saw chambers feeding this

was it the day when that asshole hacked TR?

[Mr. Chambers]

ok, i left feedback but it got erased so i relistened and i'ma refeed(yes, its the act of giving feedback a 2nd time)

your delivery is pretty good considering how new you are to this. lyrics are cool, nothing that makes me go up and down, but its still pretty good.....flow was good, yet average. You still stretch syllables and shit, but yet it didn't sound THAT bad becuz your multi's were on point. try working on a steady pace where your syllables all match up.

plus your songs are way to short, i'm tired of these 16 bar verses from you. Get more into it. do songs. Shit with concepts. switch it up alil.

but like i said, this was still good. don't wanna make it seem like i'm hating or beating you down. keep it up

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all the feed.


I'll start doing real tracks when I'm good enough...don't know when that will be though

[Robbie G]

Thanks for all the feed.


I'll start doing real tracks when I'm good enough...don't know when that will be though

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This is why you'll be great someday. You understand what it takes to make great tracks, and don't rush out shit.

[Satire]

That my Hip-Hop would stop killin they dreams
But I won't stop, then cops visit the scene

These 2 lines specifically flowed really well . If you continued it for 1 more line it would have sounded great.

Don't let the dudes who keep bashing your music when they're losing an argument get to you. That attitude you got going is going to pay off. You have the cocky-ness of the underground legends

[Tranquil]

this is dope you defiantly flowed well over this beat, from what i heard you didnt slip up once your delivery on this is good aswell, your vocals really stood out for me aswell as the lyrics, this is a great little track... 4.5/5

could you check out my new song?
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107536

[mdemaz]

It's like a weekly jizz in my pants.
King Sentus!

Keeping putting out more stuff. One day you will be a power player.

[mceddie]

Good shit man, i already reviewed it once but my comment got deleted.
flow is 9/10, lyrics id say 8/10, and of course the beats great :P
keep at it man!

[Xray]

I don't like the lyrics on this. Basic as shit lol.